Comment from Titanx9

Excellent

There is an eye that follows all of man's deeds, but I doubt whether he's invisible because you can see His creations and wonders everywhere - the rain, the snow, the air, etc. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for review with good views

Comment from Michael Wayne

Good

Does it not feel like cheating when you set out to write a piece based on syllable count and then have multiple instances of truncated words in order to fill the form?

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Ah yes mate! You have a really creative ability to write such nice pieces and make your thoughts known in such few words. You are also correct my friend, he who knows all, knows your needs. Well done, cheers and blessings, Fez.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for review with appreciation

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Rictameter form is followed well and is a good form for this piece which goes nicely with the other 2 I have read for your newest book. Ddi you finish your last one? I must have missed the ending. Interesting use of words and your author notes will be helpful to many in understanding this. Good work~Debbie

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for review

Comment from steevie

Excellent

So what your saying is to not put faith in yourself but in a higher being, is what I get from this read.

An interesting piece here.

steve
smiles

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for assumptive review

Comment from arsinBW

Excellent

This is great. It has a feeling of giving and taking, a yin and yang. A cycle of life feeling. It is very good and I enjoyed.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for review

Comment from vkmack

Excellent

Ask not and ye shall be given. Absolutely. It is all in the hands of a higher order or power who knows already anyway. This is your usual great work. Love the creative use of rictameter. Rarely see that here. Wonderful job.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from justatuna

Good

I really want to give you a higher review, but I just can't make sense of what you are saying. That may be a reflection on me. I hear the power in your words and sense something important, but the structure makes it too difficult. At least for me. Very good write.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hi Dear, how are you today? I know I've sure learned a thing or two after being around on planetoid earth for so many years. Sadly I've lost a few things too! But that's the way it goes. Lovely Rictameter from the ether.

Hope your day is great....Gloria

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

A very clever and perhaps inspired write, as the author claims, either for himself or his protagonist. I find it to be quite enjoyable.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013