Oh Life!
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Comment from Carole Rosa
Alcreator Litt Dear, I have tried to write nice reviews for you but honestly, I don't understand your works at all. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason to your poems. Carole
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Alcreator Litt Dear, I have tried to write nice reviews for you but honestly, I don't understand your works at all. There doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason to your poems. Carole
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
God gives all answers. It is up to mankind to listen. Answers come whether or not we ask. And, come most unexpectedly and in unusual ways sometimes. He lives and answers me daily.
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God gives all answers. It is up to mankind to listen. Answers come whether or not we ask. And, come most unexpectedly and in unusual ways sometimes. He lives and answers me daily.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
Comment from Laurie Clayton
I could be wrong, but this speaks to me of a Universal power, it can not be seen or measured by science or maths. As a reiki master, I believe that this energy will provide
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I could be wrong, but this speaks to me of a Universal power, it can not be seen or measured by science or maths. As a reiki master, I believe that this energy will provide
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
Comment from mumsyone
Rictameter or not, your poem is not understandable. What language recognizes 'yond mort' as beyond mortal? or 'mystic ord' as mystic order? Without your author notes, no one can possible know what you're saying. Sorry.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Rictameter or not, your poem is not understandable. What language recognizes 'yond mort' as beyond mortal? or 'mystic ord' as mystic order? Without your author notes, no one can possible know what you're saying. Sorry.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Ahhh...Yes, the unseen eye. Your poem here reminds me of a story I weaved involving something called "Orda" a silent checks and balances system that is all around us, the concept of what really is God as compared to the God that everyone believes to be an actual physical sentinent being. Excellent formatting and structure here. Cheers.
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Ahhh...Yes, the unseen eye. Your poem here reminds me of a story I weaved involving something called "Orda" a silent checks and balances system that is all around us, the concept of what really is God as compared to the God that everyone believes to be an actual physical sentinent being. Excellent formatting and structure here. Cheers.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi Al,
full marks for what you intend to say. It's probably me - maybe I'm the one who's not bright and unable to comprehend - so I'm giving you a five! :)
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Hi Al,
full marks for what you intend to say. It's probably me - maybe I'm the one who's not bright and unable to comprehend - so I'm giving you a five! :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Janet Foor
I really liked the artwork you chose for this one. A Ricktameter is quite a challenging accomplishment. I was confused by the verbiage but wish you well with your poetic endeavors.
Blessings
Janet
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I really liked the artwork you chose for this one. A Ricktameter is quite a challenging accomplishment. I was confused by the verbiage but wish you well with your poetic endeavors.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from words
I am trying to understand what you are saying here.
THe odd syntax has me baffled
I will give you the benefit of the doubt and give you "good" rating.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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I am trying to understand what you are saying here.
THe odd syntax has me baffled
I will give you the benefit of the doubt and give you "good" rating.
d
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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thanks for trying so hard...
your wisdom sparks from your words...
you must be great reviewer...
with due honour i request you
please stop reviewing my works
please escape me...
i feel sick with your words...
so you have reviewed my works last in your life
please stop reviewing me any more...
wishing you every success in your reviewing goal...
wishing you best of luck...
Comment from Alexander E Poet
you lost me again. I don't really understand what you are getting at, I think you need more details or some author notes to hell this piece out. sorry
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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you lost me again. I don't really understand what you are getting at, I think you need more details or some author notes to hell this piece out. sorry
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It doesn't matter what we get given, it's how we respond that counts, and how we cope when the things we want is not given but has to be earned. Lots of different thoughts on this one! xsx Sandra
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It doesn't matter what we get given, it's how we respond that counts, and how we cope when the things we want is not given but has to be earned. Lots of different thoughts on this one! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
