Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Enjoy!"Experiences of living
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Comment from AlvinTEthington
Good rictameter. Perfect execution of form. I was remind of the philosophy of Alfred North Whitehead when I read this. He said experience precedes consicousness, not that consciousness precedes experience.
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Good rictameter. Perfect execution of form. I was remind of the philosophy of Alfred North Whitehead when I read this. He said experience precedes consicousness, not that consciousness precedes experience.
Comment Written 28-May-2006
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Here you are again...lol. Great job on the meter, flow and delivering the message. I really liked the format and the thoughts behind this. It reminds me of a theme in a song by Garth Brooks kinda... nice work
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Here you are again...lol. Great job on the meter, flow and delivering the message. I really liked the format and the thoughts behind this. It reminds me of a theme in a song by Garth Brooks kinda... nice work
Comment Written 28-May-2006
Comment from sharon fallis
This is a good poem. I like the questioning and excellent thinking that went int the writing of it. Very good word form and usage. Wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing. Sharon
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This is a good poem. I like the questioning and excellent thinking that went int the writing of it. Very good word form and usage. Wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing. Sharon
Comment Written 28-May-2006
Comment from tuskantail
Well said in a short piece. Yes, sometimes we can't understand why something has happened, but then it turns out to be a blessing in disguise. Enjoyed very much.
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Well said in a short piece. Yes, sometimes we can't understand why something has happened, but then it turns out to be a blessing in disguise. Enjoyed very much.
Comment Written 28-May-2006
Comment from thelordreigns
This is an outstanding rictameter. The spiritual and soulish self are so intertwined. I love the way you did this with your poem. Faith is the most powerful force on earth. Bravo - joanne
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This is an outstanding rictameter. The spiritual and soulish self are so intertwined. I love the way you did this with your poem. Faith is the most powerful force on earth. Bravo - joanne
Comment Written 21-Apr-2006
Comment from KING SLATON
I did not find anything within this piece that was outside of the structured format required in a Rictameter poem. I did not fully understand it but that is no fault of the author.
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I did not find anything within this piece that was outside of the structured format required in a Rictameter poem. I did not fully understand it but that is no fault of the author.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2006
Comment from mswritealot
Refreshing and thought-provoking
Science,math and logic tossed when gifts appear without explanation
Raw emotion thrives throughout as well as previous philosophies now questionable.
Excellent form, and message Rosie
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Refreshing and thought-provoking
Science,math and logic tossed when gifts appear without explanation
Raw emotion thrives throughout as well as previous philosophies now questionable.
Excellent form, and message Rosie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2006
Comment from teafor2
Author notes saved this reader on this one-smile. A metaphoric
write presented well within this structured/fixed form. Scribe/
speaker inferences his aura is such that he is administered to by
an omnipotent benefactor. Smooth flowing verbiage takes reader(s)
through a personal slant of protagonist gratuitous life.
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Author notes saved this reader on this one-smile. A metaphoric
write presented well within this structured/fixed form. Scribe/
speaker inferences his aura is such that he is administered to by
an omnipotent benefactor. Smooth flowing verbiage takes reader(s)
through a personal slant of protagonist gratuitous life.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2006
Comment from WorstPoetic Reviewer
Yes, I do follow what exactly you convey here, nice, this is a Rictameter per structure and it is obviously professionally done, I understand you ask for anything and everything and you are given by the Super Power (I know He is God) but every time it comes to you in a different style or order, so you get all but differently, what a Blessing by God and this is to be believed by those who believe in God and no Science or Faculty or Subject can prove it right or wrong for it is true but cannot be proved before others or by the help of a person well-versed in Science or such other subject of reasoning or logic for it is beyond such mortal reasoning for it is as per God Order and which is only a person who gets that can feel and he cannot show or prove it before others, nicely done. I am interested in your works, love at first sight, your bio is really impressive.
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Yes, I do follow what exactly you convey here, nice, this is a Rictameter per structure and it is obviously professionally done, I understand you ask for anything and everything and you are given by the Super Power (I know He is God) but every time it comes to you in a different style or order, so you get all but differently, what a Blessing by God and this is to be believed by those who believe in God and no Science or Faculty or Subject can prove it right or wrong for it is true but cannot be proved before others or by the help of a person well-versed in Science or such other subject of reasoning or logic for it is beyond such mortal reasoning for it is as per God Order and which is only a person who gets that can feel and he cannot show or prove it before others, nicely done. I am interested in your works, love at first sight, your bio is really impressive.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2006
Comment from National Scholar
It is a right Rictameter in structure where the poet clearly passes on a glorious message that whatever he asks is given by an unexplained power (I know it refers to God) but all given by such power is always different from what the poet asks for there is no reason, subject or knowledge can measure such natural process. Truly enjoyable.
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It is a right Rictameter in structure where the poet clearly passes on a glorious message that whatever he asks is given by an unexplained power (I know it refers to God) but all given by such power is always different from what the poet asks for there is no reason, subject or knowledge can measure such natural process. Truly enjoyable.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2006
