Oh Life!
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Comment from Snitz
You use so very many styles in your writs. I wish I was better versed in the styles. It truly helps when you put author notes. Thanks!
The first thing that came to mind when I read this was "Ask and you shall recieve" and to follow..again.. " You get what you need and not always what you want in anothers time table not that of our own." Great job! Snitz
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You use so very many styles in your writs. I wish I was better versed in the styles. It truly helps when you put author notes. Thanks!
The first thing that came to mind when I read this was "Ask and you shall recieve" and to follow..again.. " You get what you need and not always what you want in anothers time table not that of our own." Great job! Snitz
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from ScarletAffliction
an unseen eye keeps track
my needs, not ask
given
I loved the unexpected rhymes and easy flow of this. Your style really shined in this one and I was able to arrive at your message. Good work!
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an unseen eye keeps track
my needs, not ask
given
I loved the unexpected rhymes and easy flow of this. Your style really shined in this one and I was able to arrive at your message. Good work!
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from lkdunny
You have a talent with word usage that keeps the readers attention, while letting us step out side the box when reading and absorbing your words. Yet you deliver your message clearly in most cases. (and this comments is just my personal understanding) This piece had power and strength through out. Well done. lkdunny
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You have a talent with word usage that keeps the readers attention, while letting us step out side the box when reading and absorbing your words. Yet you deliver your message clearly in most cases. (and this comments is just my personal understanding) This piece had power and strength through out. Well done. lkdunny
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Dilli Bikram Edingo
I enjoy reading ALCREATOR WRITER's poem 'I Enjoy!' veru much. This sounds very much laboured poem; only few poets can write. This poem is stylistically unique and elegaant. the poet has created his/her own textual grammar: words and beginning, which is creative. At first, reader4s may feel it diificult, but the instant they understand it they are undoutedly overjoyed---as this is what I have felt.
Next, this poem is esoteric, I think so. The poet asks for something and gets it. But way is beyond naturality and science. It seems as if he is gifted with divine power to communicate with God. This quality makes it one of the best poems like that of William Blake.
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I enjoy reading ALCREATOR WRITER's poem 'I Enjoy!' veru much. This sounds very much laboured poem; only few poets can write. This poem is stylistically unique and elegaant. the poet has created his/her own textual grammar: words and beginning, which is creative. At first, reader4s may feel it diificult, but the instant they understand it they are undoutedly overjoyed---as this is what I have felt.
Next, this poem is esoteric, I think so. The poet asks for something and gets it. But way is beyond naturality and science. It seems as if he is gifted with divine power to communicate with God. This quality makes it one of the best poems like that of William Blake.
Recognized
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from MikeSamford
Another good one and a lot of thought this little ditty gives, a well written and thought-out write and one we all could live by the form is also perfect, a good job all around.
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Another good one and a lot of thought this little ditty gives, a well written and thought-out write and one we all could live by the form is also perfect, a good job all around.
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Beatlegirl61
I 'cheat' with o'er all the time, so I'll let you slide with your line: "Whate'er asked"...Lol's...I love the diolouge here and the theme as well as a good written ric!! Nicely done and glad I have read and learned!!
Take care, be well and peace!! Carol ::))
'Beatle' quote today: "Back when income tax was all we had!!..."
(When we was fab...George Harrison)
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I 'cheat' with o'er all the time, so I'll let you slide with your line: "Whate'er asked"...Lol's...I love the diolouge here and the theme as well as a good written ric!! Nicely done and glad I have read and learned!!
Take care, be well and peace!! Carol ::))
'Beatle' quote today: "Back when income tax was all we had!!..."
(When we was fab...George Harrison)
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Mrs Jones
The structure is perfectly correct. As you know by now I usually have a bit of a hard time with your poetry, but this is a very good write. Religion would interpret it as ....God knows best.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
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The structure is perfectly correct. As you know by now I usually have a bit of a hard time with your poetry, but this is a very good write. Religion would interpret it as ....God knows best.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from Georgina Lenty
What you have written is the most funky way of saying that someone is always around to take care of our needs even before we ask for it! Very refreshing, and well done!
Georgina
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What you have written is the most funky way of saying that someone is always around to take care of our needs even before we ask for it! Very refreshing, and well done!
Georgina
Comment Written 29-May-2006
Comment from mamre07
This one caught my attention and the interpretation and author's notes helped a lot. Thanks for a great poem and an interesting message.
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This one caught my attention and the interpretation and author's notes helped a lot. Thanks for a great poem and an interesting message.
Comment Written 28-May-2006
Comment from cheyennewy
An amazing rictameter. Sometimes life is not logical or predictable...guess that is why it is so much fun to be alive! Who knows what awaits us when life is over? No one can predict and I think that is a good thing...I will be content to be surprised. Great write...enjoyed it very much...cheyenne
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An amazing rictameter. Sometimes life is not logical or predictable...guess that is why it is so much fun to be alive! Who knows what awaits us when life is over? No one can predict and I think that is a good thing...I will be content to be surprised. Great write...enjoyed it very much...cheyenne
Comment Written 28-May-2006
