Oh Life!
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is very thought-provoking--addressing a highly-debated issue about science and God. Science cannot explain Him away! As you say, there is that "unseen eye."
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Your ultra-concise poem is very thought-provoking--addressing a highly-debated issue about science and God. Science cannot explain Him away! As you say, there is that "unseen eye."
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
Comment from Righteous Riter
This in an interesting piece. The writer does a good job of getting to the point. The writer brings the thought and emotion in this one. It's a little different to what I normally hear but it's all good.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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This in an interesting piece. The writer does a good job of getting to the point. The writer brings the thought and emotion in this one. It's a little different to what I normally hear but it's all good.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for nice review
Comment from dmt1967
This is a cool poem but I must confess I don't understand it I like the way it is written however and I like the planning thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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This is a cool poem but I must confess I don't understand it I like the way it is written however and I like the planning thank you for sharing
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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thanks for good review
Comment from marali
Socratic, as in the Peloponnesian War.
The rational goes by the sounding,
Not all by the syllable ending.
It goes far to my senses, far.
When wearing my aqualung,
Of mundane vein,
I prefer to sing the tune,
Down key to my tune,
For the sung song,
All the way in.
It goes to my heart zone
Because it is my prone.
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Socratic, as in the Peloponnesian War.
The rational goes by the sounding,
Not all by the syllable ending.
It goes far to my senses, far.
When wearing my aqualung,
Of mundane vein,
I prefer to sing the tune,
Down key to my tune,
For the sung song,
All the way in.
It goes to my heart zone
Because it is my prone.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2006
Comment from VICTIMEYES
well took a while but i thik i've got it, you need not pray to much because theres a EYE alway's watching and does know what i need before i ever ask and will give it, yea. this is a monster writing.
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well took a while but i thik i've got it, you need not pray to much because theres a EYE alway's watching and does know what i need before i ever ask and will give it, yea. this is a monster writing.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from PineBoxPoet
Very moving. I have read many of your poems and liked them all. You inspire me to lean the different types of poerty you write. Thank you.
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Very moving. I have read many of your poems and liked them all. You inspire me to lean the different types of poerty you write. Thank you.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from Kingsland
an interesting take on prolific questions
I have no suggestions to make for this well written verse
this was my pleasure to read and review... John
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an interesting take on prolific questions
I have no suggestions to make for this well written verse
this was my pleasure to read and review... John
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from jebraun
Interesting concept, yet... I guess it feels like some of it is forced because some very uncommon abbreviations or truncations are used. I would think that reading something that didn't need a translation key would be more fulfilling.
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Interesting concept, yet... I guess it feels like some of it is forced because some very uncommon abbreviations or truncations are used. I would think that reading something that didn't need a translation key would be more fulfilling.
Comment Written 31-May-2006
Comment from proudgranny
I enjoyed the message in this poem. Our needs are given and not asked for which is why, I think, we can never want, want, want. Great Job on these poems!
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I enjoyed the message in this poem. Our needs are given and not asked for which is why, I think, we can never want, want, want. Great Job on these poems!
Comment Written 30-May-2006
Comment from drivenbackward
At first glance I was confused, but as I read it again, I got it. Very well planned and deeper in meaning than the casual reader might recognize. I enjoyed it.
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At first glance I was confused, but as I read it again, I got it. Very well planned and deeper in meaning than the casual reader might recognize. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 30-May-2006
