Oh Life!
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Comment from Boogienights
You are given what you want by God and that is good. What about those however, who pray for help that is not given? I don't understand the concept of "ask and ye shall receive". It doesn't always work out that way.
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You are given what you want by God and that is good. What about those however, who pray for help that is not given? I don't understand the concept of "ask and ye shall receive". It doesn't always work out that way.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I Enjoy!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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I Enjoy!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
We know we are not worthy for God to give us anything, but He continues on giving because we are His children and He loves us.
I most often have difficulty reading and understanding your poems. I'm not saying they are bad, just I have trouble understanding. In another review you were asked if English is your native tongue because you write it very precisely.
Patty
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We know we are not worthy for God to give us anything, but He continues on giving because we are His children and He loves us.
I most often have difficulty reading and understanding your poems. I'm not saying they are bad, just I have trouble understanding. In another review you were asked if English is your native tongue because you write it very precisely.
Patty
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from pharp
My Friend,
Thanks for sharing this post.
God surely supplies all of our needs according to His riches and glory.
He knows what we need before we even ask. If God feeds the birds of the air, how blessed we are that He will supply our every need.
We have not, because we ask not.
Blessings...Portia
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My Friend,
Thanks for sharing this post.
God surely supplies all of our needs according to His riches and glory.
He knows what we need before we even ask. If God feeds the birds of the air, how blessed we are that He will supply our every need.
We have not, because we ask not.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from Ricky1024
I enjoyed your work and it was excellently written presented and and your editors notes of course were accurate.
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I must confess that I am truly blessed.
Blessed and verse but sometimes cursed!
Because to lose something so dear?
The remaining life you feel like you're not here.
Truly Truly Blessed?
For I am as I always am...
No more no less than ordinary Man.
Living within the sin..
Where I am just...
"The Wisp in the Wind"
Waiting for my life to Again?
*Begin?
I thought you might like this creator?
Editor's Notes: *Begin
verb/ be.gin /begin/
1) start form or undergo the first part of (an action or activity)
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Sometimes people go throughout their entire life they don't know what their purpose is.
Exactly why the "Nee Factor"
Comes in?
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Enjoy this fine and blessed June day?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
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I enjoyed your work and it was excellently written presented and and your editors notes of course were accurate.
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I must confess that I am truly blessed.
Blessed and verse but sometimes cursed!
Because to lose something so dear?
The remaining life you feel like you're not here.
Truly Truly Blessed?
For I am as I always am...
No more no less than ordinary Man.
Living within the sin..
Where I am just...
"The Wisp in the Wind"
Waiting for my life to Again?
*Begin?
I thought you might like this creator?
Editor's Notes: *Begin
verb/ be.gin /begin/
1) start form or undergo the first part of (an action or activity)
...
Sometimes people go throughout their entire life they don't know what their purpose is.
Exactly why the "Nee Factor"
Comes in?
...
Enjoy this fine and blessed June day?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
I'm afraid if God doesn't provide it, it would never be received. So He does. All creation depends on God for not only the good things, but the food, the clothing, the revelation by which we live, well done, a good post, well done, blessings Roy
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I'm afraid if God doesn't provide it, it would never be received. So He does. All creation depends on God for not only the good things, but the food, the clothing, the revelation by which we live, well done, a good post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Sorry dear poet but I haven't a glue what the message you are trying to get across. Hey, Ho. Pete
given,
whate'er I ask,
differently, I know,
my Science Math thought goes wrong, as
unexplained power 'yond mort' offers per
natural, unknown, mystic ord,
an unseen eye, keeps track
my needs, ask not,
given.
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Sorry dear poet but I haven't a glue what the message you are trying to get across. Hey, Ho. Pete
given,
whate'er I ask,
differently, I know,
my Science Math thought goes wrong, as
unexplained power 'yond mort' offers per
natural, unknown, mystic ord,
an unseen eye, keeps track
my needs, ask not,
given.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2021
Comment from rjuselius
this is an interesting piece of poetry! i like the structure and the fact you that your last word is the same as the first one.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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this is an interesting piece of poetry! i like the structure and the fact you that your last word is the same as the first one.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from chasennov
'I Enjoy.' Oh for the joys of knowledge! Some of us mortals just have a little more knowledge than a lot of others, and others have a lot lesser knowledge than us mortals. Well done.
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'I Enjoy.' Oh for the joys of knowledge! Some of us mortals just have a little more knowledge than a lot of others, and others have a lot lesser knowledge than us mortals. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Al
In this context, the word usage is much better. Your author's notes are helpful to those of us that are purest in the use of the English language. It makes 5 stars worth of sense to me
Bear
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Hello Al
In this context, the word usage is much better. Your author's notes are helpful to those of us that are purest in the use of the English language. It makes 5 stars worth of sense to me
Bear
Comment Written 10-Apr-2013
