Redemption
An Acrostic Poem12 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That was a powerfully written poem. Perhaps, I found it relatable. I have been through too much, but not enough. I am unsure how to redeem your future. I am ready. Motivational lines. Nicely written. Great work :)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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That was a powerfully written poem. Perhaps, I found it relatable. I have been through too much, but not enough. I am unsure how to redeem your future. I am ready. Motivational lines. Nicely written. Great work :)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you, yes it will be a hard road, writing about such things helps, much appreciated
Comment from RShipp
The picture you chose was a good match for your topic.
I like the colors you chose for the presentation of your poem and its wording.
Best of luck in the Name Acrostic Contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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The picture you chose was a good match for your topic.
I like the colors you chose for the presentation of your poem and its wording.
Best of luck in the Name Acrostic Contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thanks, I think?
Comment from lance michaels
Redemption is so hard to come by. I try and find it every day from the people whom I've hurt in the past. I don't know if I'll ever get it but I surely hope to. Very important message that you delivered with this well written poem!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Redemption is so hard to come by. I try and find it every day from the people whom I've hurt in the past. I don't know if I'll ever get it but I surely hope to. Very important message that you delivered with this well written poem!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much, yes it is hard to forgive ourselves
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Acrostic Poem
Redemption
Hello my friend,
Beautiful poem and presentation. I like your acrostic theme...the lines make sense and they fit the form. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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An Acrostic Poem
Redemption
Hello my friend,
Beautiful poem and presentation. I like your acrostic theme...the lines make sense and they fit the form. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments
Comment from June Sargent
The road to redemption can be a long and difficult one, depending upon how many stops you have to make in repairing and restoring relationships. Broken lives are not easy to mend, but even scars can have value after they heal. They serve as reminders of the pitfalls - so we can avoid them on the rest of our journey through life.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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The road to redemption can be a long and difficult one, depending upon how many stops you have to make in repairing and restoring relationships. Broken lives are not easy to mend, but even scars can have value after they heal. They serve as reminders of the pitfalls - so we can avoid them on the rest of our journey through life.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for these wonderful comments
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a path we take in order to feel renewed and forgiven and able to face the future, you described the journey perfectly here in your lever acrostic, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a path we take in order to feel renewed and forgiven and able to face the future, you described the journey perfectly here in your lever acrostic, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of your An Acrostic your poem about
Redemption has an important message ---
Trade your past to redeem your future
Inviting the chance to stand once again.
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Hello unknown author of your An Acrostic your poem about
Redemption has an important message ---
Trade your past to redeem your future
Inviting the chance to stand once again.
Gert
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
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Hello you are welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about the word redemption that has many reasons to need us to turn to redemption that will change the course of our lives forever.
Typo
Decaying frienships(friendships)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the word redemption that has many reasons to need us to turn to redemption that will change the course of our lives forever.
Typo
Decaying frienships(friendships)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you and for your help, much appreciated
Comment from Cindy Decker
Hi, Kahpot. Excellent acrostic! We've all been through the things you talk about in your poem. I especially love "Trade your past to redeem your future," and "Never end the pursuit of lives to amend." Such wonderful guidelines to live by. Beautiful work. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice week, exponentially.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Hi, Kahpot. Excellent acrostic! We've all been through the things you talk about in your poem. I especially love "Trade your past to redeem your future," and "Never end the pursuit of lives to amend." Such wonderful guidelines to live by. Beautiful work. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice week, exponentially.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much
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I?m so sorry I put your name on my review! Excellent poem. Good luck and stay well.
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No worries my Friend
Comment from Mistydawn
What a very well-written poem. Your great word choice describes the steps to redemption perfectly. How it's a long hard path but will be worth it in the end. I especially liked this line. Trade your past to redeem your future. It's a great goal to work towards. Very nicely done. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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What a very well-written poem. Your great word choice describes the steps to redemption perfectly. How it's a long hard path but will be worth it in the end. I especially liked this line. Trade your past to redeem your future. It's a great goal to work towards. Very nicely done. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, yes it is hard
