When I Came To The Cross
Short testimony poetry15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I loved your word play in the second and third lines of each of the tercets: "testings" into "testimonies" and "messes" into "messages." Thank you for sharing God's work in your life, Patricia!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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I loved your word play in the second and third lines of each of the tercets: "testings" into "testimonies" and "messes" into "messages." Thank you for sharing God's work in your life, Patricia!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thanks Helen, for your nice review.
Comment from Janetsue
I love your poetic testimony, Patricia. It shares your faith and feelings very well in just six lines. We are called to honor Him and share the Good News message. You are doing that beautifully, my friend!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I love your poetic testimony, Patricia. It shares your faith and feelings very well in just six lines. We are called to honor Him and share the Good News message. You are doing that beautifully, my friend!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from forestport12
Nice play on words. I like the alliteration with how you use him taking your messes and making them messages. There is so much here with so few words that I feel as though I've done a wonderful devotional, thanks to your work
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Nice play on words. I like the alliteration with how you use him taking your messes and making them messages. There is so much here with so few words that I feel as though I've done a wonderful devotional, thanks to your work
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about being willing to lay our lives at the feet of Jesus and give Him all our testings that He can change them to testimonies and our messes into messages
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about being willing to lay our lives at the feet of Jesus and give Him all our testings that He can change them to testimonies and our messes into messages
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute, very inspiring poem, that is putting us back on track on God's orbit: "When I came to the cross,
Jesus took each of my testings
making them into testimonies."
Thank you for sharing, and stay safe my friend.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Cute, very inspiring poem, that is putting us back on track on God's orbit: "When I came to the cross,
Jesus took each of my testings
making them into testimonies."
Thank you for sharing, and stay safe my friend.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from juliaSjames
I've just been reading about vulnerabilities and how we are sometimes ashamed to confess our true selves with all our shortcomings to the Most High. Your poem reminds us that God has the power to transform our actions.
Beautiful write.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I've just been reading about vulnerabilities and how we are sometimes ashamed to confess our true selves with all our shortcomings to the Most High. Your poem reminds us that God has the power to transform our actions.
Beautiful write.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your spiritual tercets and parallel illustration selection. I appreciated your transforming "testings" into "testimonies" and "messes" into "messages". Keep being productive- Joan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I admired your spiritual tercets and parallel illustration selection. I appreciated your transforming "testings" into "testimonies" and "messes" into "messages". Keep being productive- Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a thought provoking poem. God does take our clay and mold it into something new and useful, if we let Him, like your testings and messes. You've come up with a well written piece!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a thought provoking poem. God does take our clay and mold it into something new and useful, if we let Him, like your testings and messes. You've come up with a well written piece!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written short testimony poem you have penned about the cross and how Jesus turned your messes into messages for Him. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a very beautiful and well written short testimony poem you have penned about the cross and how Jesus turned your messes into messages for Him. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from susand3022
I think that would scare me right onto oblivion. I think I'd run to the next universe. Can a person do that??? I wonder... it looked pretty endless...
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I think that would scare me right onto oblivion. I think I'd run to the next universe. Can a person do that??? I wonder... it looked pretty endless...
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the nice review.
