No and Yes
Joseph's Star Poetry Contest Entry11 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Great entry for the Joseph's Star contest. Good syllable count and beautiful presentation. I like this form. Good job. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the Joseph's Star contest. Good syllable count and beautiful presentation. I like this form. Good job. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review! I'm glad you liked this. These are lovely comments that I greatly appreciate. Have a great week and stay safe and healthy.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt.
This lovely verse is about no and yes and you and me.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt.
This lovely verse is about no and yes and you and me.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Sharon, for this great review. I'm glad you liked it. Much appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from RShipp
You have no rhyme in your poem and the syllable count seems accurate. Each line seems to make a statement.
Your picture was a good choice.
Best of luck in the Joseph's Star writing contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You have no rhyme in your poem and the syllable count seems accurate. Each line seems to make a statement.
Your picture was a good choice.
Best of luck in the Joseph's Star writing contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, RShipp, for this great review. I'm glad you liked this entry. Your time is much appreciated. Have a good week and stay safe.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good job on your entry! I'd never done a Joseph's Star before. It's not easy making complete statements with just so many syllables. Good luck!
Patty
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Good job on your entry! I'd never done a Joseph's Star before. It's not easy making complete statements with just so many syllables. Good luck!
Patty
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Patty. Yep, these are not easy little poems to put together. I'm glad you liked this. All those stars are appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned using the Joseph's Star format. You used very good words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for letting us know this was not about the virus. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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This is a very well written poem you have penned using the Joseph's Star format. You used very good words and very interesting imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for letting us know this was not about the virus. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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What a lovely review, Teri. Your comments are great and I'm glad you liked this. The stars are much appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the Joseph's star contest
with the two contrasting stars of negative and positive energy.
The syllables are exact, but there is a slight problem.
The contest says no rhymes and you have no/go in the first half.
You need a synonym for one of them "leave" or "end'' would work for go.
Otherwise, excellent work and great presentation.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the Joseph's star contest
with the two contrasting stars of negative and positive energy.
The syllables are exact, but there is a slight problem.
The contest says no rhymes and you have no/go in the first half.
You need a synonym for one of them "leave" or "end'' would work for go.
Otherwise, excellent work and great presentation.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you Robert for this lovely review. Your fixes are good but would throw off the structure of the star. They are appreciated though. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is very creatively composed and descriptive. It sends a powerful message about freedom, breaking loose from some stifling situation or person.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Your poem is very creatively composed and descriptive. It sends a powerful message about freedom, breaking loose from some stifling situation or person.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thanks, Janice, for these great comments. Love the stars. :-) Lovely review and I'm glad you liked this. Much appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a cool yin-yang Joseph's Star offering -- excellent presentation of the two 'perspectives' that both say the same thing.... this is over/no more. ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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What a cool yin-yang Joseph's Star offering -- excellent presentation of the two 'perspectives' that both say the same thing.... this is over/no more. ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Much appreciated, Y. Thanks for the stars and these lovely comments. Have a great week and stay safe.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Wow. I would not want to be on the receiving end of that particular exchange. You can definitely feel the rage there. The artwork selected works very well with this verse. Expertly executed.. Remind me to stay on your good side or out of your way. LOL
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Wow. I would not want to be on the receiving end of that particular exchange. You can definitely feel the rage there. The artwork selected works very well with this verse. Expertly executed.. Remind me to stay on your good side or out of your way. LOL
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Ha! Cool review, Brenda. Thanks so much! Lovely comments. Much appreciated. Have a great week and stay safe.
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You're welcome! Stay safe!
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! This is exceptional in every ramification. The black background is superb! The image is grand. Your choice of colours is just wonderful! The cover image is grand! Just look at this. Exceptional again, I say! My best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Wow! This is exceptional in every ramification. The black background is superb! The image is grand. Your choice of colours is just wonderful! The cover image is grand! Just look at this. Exceptional again, I say! My best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much for this stunning review and giant sixer! I'm so glad you liked it. These are lovely comments and are very much appreciated! Thanks again. Have a great week and stay safe.
