Spring, Wonderful Spring!
Rejoice, inside and out...31 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Spring, Wonderful Spring!
Hello my friend
A beautiful entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Wonderful presentation.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Spring, Wonderful Spring!
Hello my friend
A beautiful entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt contest. Good syllable count. Wonderful presentation.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for you review!
Comment from TPAC
A happy thought of spring to you, finding law restrictions yielding its balance of desiring out door spring endeavors, wanting people to mingle and get to know the other. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A happy thought of spring to you, finding law restrictions yielding its balance of desiring out door spring endeavors, wanting people to mingle and get to know the other. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, skillfully written, uplifting poem; it sends a powerful message about the things we CAN still do--all while maintaining our social distancing stance!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely, skillfully written, uplifting poem; it sends a powerful message about the things we CAN still do--all while maintaining our social distancing stance!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from Bichon
This was such an uplifting and cheerful poem to read! The form was unique and the poem itself flowed very smoothly. I loved the positive tone too, great work!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This was such an uplifting and cheerful poem to read! The form was unique and the poem itself flowed very smoothly. I loved the positive tone too, great work!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your positive comments!
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! This is very unique and brilliant! I am so in love with this. Such a warm and wonderful offering for the contest. A perfect cover image for this very grand piece of work.
My best wishes in the contest. Cheers!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Wow! This is very unique and brilliant! I am so in love with this. Such a warm and wonderful offering for the contest. A perfect cover image for this very grand piece of work.
My best wishes in the contest. Cheers!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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It sounds as though you're smiling... Hooray!! Mission accomplished! Thank you so much for the review and be sure to pass your smile along!! Take care out there!
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Thank you so much for your very kind wordings. Stay safe as well.
Cheers!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Joseph star poem with multiple stanzas to celebrate he coming if Spring that us always a joyous time and we celebrate the cold winter's end.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A very well-written Joseph star poem with multiple stanzas to celebrate he coming if Spring that us always a joyous time and we celebrate the cold winter's end.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from samandlancelot
I like your chosen words to begin and end each stanza. They relate well to each other if you read those alone. But, of course, what's between the single syllable lines expands the joy and elation you produce with your love of spring.
Contest entry says no rhymes, but your have rhymes. I like the rhymes, but I don't know if no rhymes is a requirement or option.
Well done!
Patricia
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I like your chosen words to begin and end each stanza. They relate well to each other if you read those alone. But, of course, what's between the single syllable lines expands the joy and elation you produce with your love of spring.
Contest entry says no rhymes, but your have rhymes. I like the rhymes, but I don't know if no rhymes is a requirement or option.
Well done!
Patricia
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Whew! So glad you reminded me... had forgotten that one - thank you!! All fixed and good to go! Thanx so much for your review and your assistance, my lady! Have a lovely week ahead!
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That works just as well. Glad I could help.
Comment from Ogden
In my opinion, your poem is the best one in the contest so far.
Most of the others failed to follow the "complete statement" rule, so the outcome probably will be delayed while they get an extension to make corrections.
Good luck!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, your poem is the best one in the contest so far.
Most of the others failed to follow the "complete statement" rule, so the outcome probably will be delayed while they get an extension to make corrections.
Good luck!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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My goal was to make the readers smile, Don, but it looks like you've got me grinning from ear to ear - what wonderful stars, Don - thank you so much!! I do hope that I got you to at least smirk... maybe even a slight simper...?!! Thanks so much, sir, for all of your awesome reviews and especially for this SHINY one! Take care and keep smiling!
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Smile, I do, but simper, never! :)
Don
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You know that's just 'smiling to oneself in a silly or self-conscious way'... why do I think you probably do 'simper'... at least once in a while... wink, wink. ;) ;) Take care!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Ebullient! Joy bursts forth. I like the ins and outs of the lines in the verses. The sense of celebration is contagious... oops, not a good word choice these days. Cheers. LIZ
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Ebullient! Joy bursts forth. I like the ins and outs of the lines in the verses. The sense of celebration is contagious... oops, not a good word choice these days. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Lol! But I'll take that as a smile... Hooray! Mission accomplished!! Be sure to pass along that smile and accompanying joy to others! Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Cybertron1986
Appealing rhythm with a lot of vibrant energy. I love the analogy. This rekindles that hope and joy all is looking forward to in these trying times. Can't wait to raise that toast! Cheers!
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Appealing rhythm with a lot of vibrant energy. I love the analogy. This rekindles that hope and joy all is looking forward to in these trying times. Can't wait to raise that toast! Cheers!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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It sounds as though you're smiling...Hooray!! Mission Accomplished!! Where there is the human spirit involved there is always hope!! Thank you for your review!
