Spring, Wonderful Spring!
Rejoice, inside and out...31 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are cheerful, descriptive, engaging and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem. I thought about spring and how fortunate
I am to live in Florida where it is spring all year round! The theme of
this poem is joyful and the artwork goes very well with it. May you be well and safe....
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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The author's words are cheerful, descriptive, engaging and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem. I thought about spring and how fortunate
I am to live in Florida where it is spring all year round! The theme of
this poem is joyful and the artwork goes very well with it. May you be well and safe....
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Harmony! You be safe, too!
Comment from Minglement
What a lovely, uplifting entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt. It reads smoothly and your words present beautiful imagery. Great presentation as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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What a lovely, uplifting entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt. It reads smoothly and your words present beautiful imagery. Great presentation as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thanks for such an awesome review!!
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M pleasure :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt.
This lovely verse describes the arrival of spring very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt.
This lovely verse describes the arrival of spring very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alchera
Wow! What a beautiful poem!
Oh, how easy life would be, my friend, if the whole pièce of your beautiful four octaves could become true again! Your magnificent hymn to spring is a tribute to all of us not to get discouraged and not to be overwhelmed by this sad uncontrollable event. Thank you with all my soul, o Poetess of my heart!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Wow! What a beautiful poem!
Oh, how easy life would be, my friend, if the whole pièce of your beautiful four octaves could become true again! Your magnificent hymn to spring is a tribute to all of us not to get discouraged and not to be overwhelmed by this sad uncontrollable event. Thank you with all my soul, o Poetess of my heart!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much for such an awesome review and those wonderful stars, Tony - Your support is so very important to me, sir!! And I am so sorry I'm so far behind! I apologize for this 'more cut/paste than personal response', but if I don't do something to try to get my 'head above water' I never will!! ;) :) This online education thing is going to make me crazy! :) But I've only got two more weeks worth of prep (I'm operating about 2 weeks ahead in my preps: YouTube, Assignments, Resources, Etc -- yes! I'm on YouTube! lol!) to be done for the school year and then I'll just have to keep up their weekly submittals/grading/returning.... but UGH!! ;) Thanx for your patience while I 'get there' -- take care of you and COME ON MAY 10th!! :) ;) Yvette
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You are Always welcomed Yvette and I well know what you mean with your cray on line lessons because Carmen, my eldest daughter is doing the same with her Spanish morning classes through skype. Take care of yourself, dear friend of mine! Blessings Tony
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This such a happy positive poem full of energy. It welcomes springtime with all the enthusiasm it deserves with singing, dancing, and celebrations.
Well done!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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This such a happy positive poem full of energy. It welcomes springtime with all the enthusiasm it deserves with singing, dancing, and celebrations.
Well done!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from RShipp
You have no rhyme in your poem and the syllable count seems accurate.
Each of your lines seem to make a complete statement.
Your picture was a good choice.
Best of luck in the Joseph's Star writing contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You have no rhyme in your poem and the syllable count seems accurate.
Each of your lines seem to make a complete statement.
Your picture was a good choice.
Best of luck in the Joseph's Star writing contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like what you've done with this and how superbly you've presented it. I love the beautifully descriptive, lighthearted, and well thought out way you've described Spring to us. This is really good work that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing this. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I like what you've done with this and how superbly you've presented it. I love the beautifully descriptive, lighthearted, and well thought out way you've described Spring to us. This is really good work that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing this. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this evening! Thank you for your review!
Comment from June Sargent
You have done a wonderful job of creating a Joseph's Star for the contest! It flowed beautifully and reminded us of what we have to look forward to. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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You have done a wonderful job of creating a Joseph's Star for the contest! It flowed beautifully and reminded us of what we have to look forward to. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, June! Thank you so very much for those awesome stars! Thank you for the review and the Sunshine this evening!! 😏😉
Comment from Debbie Perry
Absolutely beautifully written, great images, fantastic pictures and a smooth flow. Truly written from your heart.
As all inspired poets know, poetry comes from your heart.
Enjoyed oh so very much...
Debbie Perry
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Absolutely beautifully written, great images, fantastic pictures and a smooth flow. Truly written from your heart.
As all inspired poets know, poetry comes from your heart.
Enjoyed oh so very much...
Debbie Perry
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thank you for your review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a super job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are well-chosen, the formatting of lines is great. your words/lines flow smoothly, and your message is clear. The picture is perfect, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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You did a super job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your words are well-chosen, the formatting of lines is great. your words/lines flow smoothly, and your message is clear. The picture is perfect, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much.
