Spring, Wonderful Spring!
Rejoice, inside and out...31 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. I could never comment on a Joseph's star style because until I saw this, I had no idea what it was.
This reads very well and I like the verse a lot. It's a very well done poem and I expect it is a winner.
Well done.
robert
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Hello Yvette. I could never comment on a Joseph's star style because until I saw this, I had no idea what it was.
This reads very well and I like the verse a lot. It's a very well done poem and I expect it is a winner.
Well done.
robert
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Still behind (imagine that!)... but I do so appreciate you (you know that, right?!)!! ;) Thanx for the review, Z, and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
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The faster I go, the behinder I get.
Z [°∆°]
Comment from Joan E.
First, I was transported by the picture capturing spring and next, I enjoyed your format. I could hear the birds' "chorus" and admired your use of personification in the final stanza. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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First, I was transported by the picture capturing spring and next, I enjoyed your format. I could hear the birds' "chorus" and admired your use of personification in the final stanza. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Still behind (imagine that!)... but I do so appreciate you (you know that, right?!)!! ;) Thanx for the review, Joan, and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette, I enjoyed reading this creative writing and a new style that I haven't seen. We can use all the encouragement we can get to look forward to spring and think about positive things. Have a great day! Bill
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Yvette, I enjoyed reading this creative writing and a new style that I haven't seen. We can use all the encouragement we can get to look forward to spring and think about positive things. Have a great day! Bill
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Still behind (imagine that!)... but I do so appreciate you (you know that, right?!)!! ;) Thanx for the review, Bill, and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from lance michaels
What a glorious and inspiring poem! Spring is the best, with all the birds and animals about, flowers blooming, children riding bikes, and the incredible weather. Very nice!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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What a glorious and inspiring poem! Spring is the best, with all the birds and animals about, flowers blooming, children riding bikes, and the incredible weather. Very nice!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Lance -- Spring is my favorite time of the year!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
The dinner, the wonderful winner in my eyes, dear poetress. This is so lovely and so needed this day. Spring usually arrives in my heart long before the day. A fine tribute and celebration. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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The dinner, the wonderful winner in my eyes, dear poetress. This is so lovely and so needed this day. Spring usually arrives in my heart long before the day. A fine tribute and celebration. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thanx so much, Lady Sal -- look! I'm only three days behind now! ;) Yvette
Comment from Susanjohn
OK! I'm in! I want to dance and sing and feel the Spring's warmth!...Sigh, but here in Wisconsin...it's still cold, muggy sometimes rain, sometimes snow! BUT, loving your poem! Nicely done and presented. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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OK! I'm in! I want to dance and sing and feel the Spring's warmth!...Sigh, but here in Wisconsin...it's still cold, muggy sometimes rain, sometimes snow! BUT, loving your poem! Nicely done and presented. :-)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Susan -- and I am so sorry I'm so far behind! I apologize for this 'more cut/paste than personal response', but if I don't do something to try to get my 'head above water' I never will!! ;) :) This online education thing is going to make me crazy! :) But I've only got two more weeks worth of prep (I'm operating about 2 weeks ahead in my preps: YouTube, Assignments, Resources, Etc -- yes! I'm on YouTube! lol!) to be done for the school year and then I'll just have to keep up with their weekly submittals/grading/returning.... but UGH!! ;) Thanx for your patience while I 'get there' -- take care of you and COME ON MAY 10th!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from estory
Nice job with the meter and juxtaposition of the long and short lines to produce this rhythm of bursts of dance and song. I liked the underlying of feeling of celebrating the possibilities of spring, the fresh air, the colors, the warmth of the sunlight that beckons you outdoors. something to think about as we are all in stay at home orders. But you can still enjoy your garden....estory
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Nice job with the meter and juxtaposition of the long and short lines to produce this rhythm of bursts of dance and song. I liked the underlying of feeling of celebrating the possibilities of spring, the fresh air, the colors, the warmth of the sunlight that beckons you outdoors. something to think about as we are all in stay at home orders. But you can still enjoy your garden....estory
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Your reviews are always so uplifting, E, thank you and take care of you out there!
P.S. Know that you ARE appreciated!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rmocruz
You have effectively conformed to the writing prompt format with this pleasant Spring theme. Unfortunately, I'm dancing with myself, too bad the damned bars aren't open.
Very well executed overall.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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You have effectively conformed to the writing prompt format with this pleasant Spring theme. Unfortunately, I'm dancing with myself, too bad the damned bars aren't open.
Very well executed overall.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Aaaahhh, but the liquor stores are, right? Get some frozen lemonade at the grocery and break out the blender -- let me know when it's time to start the 'poems from the pub' and I'll match ya one for one!! ;) :) Thank you for your review, RM -- always so good to hear from you!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun and uplifting write for spring Yvette and you put a string in my step if only I could go outdoors to enjoy it all, but you brought the outdoors indoors for me here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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This is a fun and uplifting write for spring Yvette and you put a string in my step if only I could go outdoors to enjoy it all, but you brought the outdoors indoors for me here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
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Still behind (imagine that!)... but I do so appreciate you (you know that, right?!)!! ;) Thanx for the review, Dolly, and enjoy the weekend! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderfully uplifting poem, I love the style you have written this in, an excellent read with great understanding of the prompt, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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What a wonderfully uplifting poem, I love the style you have written this in, an excellent read with great understanding of the prompt, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
