Hope and a Future
Faith gives us hope.13 total reviews
Comment from humpwhistle
Begging your pardon, but hoping things will get better is less desirable than actually taking action to make things better. Hope is passive. We need action. Donald Trump hoped the virus would go away, so he was slow to act. As a result, the situation got much worse than it needed to be, and more people are dying accordingly.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Begging your pardon, but hoping things will get better is less desirable than actually taking action to make things better. Hope is passive. We need action. Donald Trump hoped the virus would go away, so he was slow to act. As a result, the situation got much worse than it needed to be, and more people are dying accordingly.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Doing what we can is important but faith and hope are what gets us through, thanks for your review, PS, not American so Trump's opinions are not that important to me and as a medical professional, I couldn't be more practical.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent Joseph's Star poem for the contest
with a perfect shape and relevant topic for these times.
Excellent positive message providing hope in troubled days.
Excellent choice of art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent Joseph's Star poem for the contest
with a perfect shape and relevant topic for these times.
Excellent positive message providing hope in troubled days.
Excellent choice of art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you Robert
Comment from Bill Schott
This Joseph's Star poem, Hope and a Future, has the proper formatting and reminds us that we shouldn't sweat the small stuff and that it is all small stuff.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This Joseph's Star poem, Hope and a Future, has the proper formatting and reminds us that we shouldn't sweat the small stuff and that it is all small stuff.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you Bill
