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Hope and a Future

Faith gives us hope.

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is nicely presented, Mystery Author. Great work with the contest prompt. I like the image, the word choices that create imagery, and your notes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend

Great entry for the Joseph's Star contest. Good syllable count and beautiful presentation. I like this form. Good job. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Joseph's Star writing prompt.
This lovely verse gives hope.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from Janetsue
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This presents a strong message in a beautiful poetic way. It offers hope during these troubling times and we need all the encouragement possible. Looking toward spending eternity in the presence of God is the most wonderful thing that can happen.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Yes, wait on the Lord. Folks tend to be impatient so they miss the little things, the fine points. Waiting is an art that one has to constantly practiced.

Well done!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from RShipp
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You have no rhyme in your poem and the syllable count seems accurate.

Your picture was a good choice.

Best of luck in the Joseph's Star writing contest.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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A nicely written poem for the prompt. It does make one stop and think about the world today. I think the Lord is trying to tell us something but we aren't ready to listen yet.
Take care!
Patty

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020

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Comment from Cindy Decker
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Excellent poem. Itâ??s concise and straightforward. What a wonderful, simple message about faith something so difficult: waiting for Godâ??s time. Very good work. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020

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    Thanks for reviewing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Hi I followed your suggestions thanks.
reply by Cindy Decker on 30-Mar-2020
    You?re welcome. Good luck
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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Tomorrow will surely be beautiful. This is very beautiful and unique! You well executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My best wishes in this regard!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Joseph star poem to bring hope although the future is not certain we should not give up hope until the end is there. Keep praying and never give up hope.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020

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    Thanks Sandra.