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A Finoacci Spiral Poem for Potlatch Poetry21 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is a message but it is laid out and seems so light at the same time. I love to read it out loud as it sounds lively. Nicely done but one I don't think I can do
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is a message but it is laid out and seems so light at the same time. I love to read it out loud as it sounds lively. Nicely done but one I don't think I can do
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Sure you can! You always say and then you do great. Thanks for the compliment.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Fibonacci Spiral poem. It is getting to our nerves all the negative stories and doomsday talk. We need to focus on the positives and make our days as pleasant as possible.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A very well-written Fibonacci Spiral poem. It is getting to our nerves all the negative stories and doomsday talk. We need to focus on the positives and make our days as pleasant as possible.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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So true. Thank you.
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh yuk! Mathematics. That's why I became a writer - to get away from numbers but mathematics has now got into poetry. Mind you this is quite clever. Lol.
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Oh yuk! Mathematics. That's why I became a writer - to get away from numbers but mathematics has now got into poetry. Mind you this is quite clever. Lol.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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hahaha. Can't escape, huh? Thanks, Jim.
Comment from Drew Delaney
An encouraging poem with good and strong advice. We must not dwell on the negative but enjoy the little things in life. I enjoyed the read and loved the presentation.
Drew xx
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An encouraging poem with good and strong advice. We must not dwell on the negative but enjoy the little things in life. I enjoyed the read and loved the presentation.
Drew xx
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I'm so glad.
Comment from Irish Rain
Wonderful advice Miss Yvonne.
I sat outside today enjoying my
daffodils, and along came the sweetest
little yellow butterfly.
Simple things bring true joy.
I love the message in your poem!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Wonderful advice Miss Yvonne.
I sat outside today enjoying my
daffodils, and along came the sweetest
little yellow butterfly.
Simple things bring true joy.
I love the message in your poem!
Blessings...
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Oh, I'm so happy you enjoy the things I do. I agree. It's the simple things that bring the most joy.
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Have a great week!!
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I loved your poem. The image and presentation were perfect for this piece. You are right we should focus on the good things in life. Your cleverly met the requirements of the style of poetry they wanted. Thank you for sharing this interesting piece with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I loved your poem. The image and presentation were perfect for this piece. You are right we should focus on the good things in life. Your cleverly met the requirements of the style of poetry they wanted. Thank you for sharing this interesting piece with us. Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Some people live their lives caught up in a whirlwind of he-said and she-said. I know people who just use their imagination to fill in the blanks when the gossip is sketchy!. Your well-written poems conveys a powerful message about the WRONG, unhealthy, way to live.
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Some people live their lives caught up in a whirlwind of he-said and she-said. I know people who just use their imagination to fill in the blanks when the gossip is sketchy!. Your well-written poems conveys a powerful message about the WRONG, unhealthy, way to live.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you. Some people will make things up if they don't know the truth.
Comment from Puzzle
Yes!! This is exactly how I would feel too. It's hard to remove yourself from all of that racket. It's so easy to get pulled in. Good job with this piece. It was an easy read and I enjoyed it!
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Yes!! This is exactly how I would feel too. It's hard to remove yourself from all of that racket. It's so easy to get pulled in. Good job with this piece. It was an easy read and I enjoyed it!
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I tend to keep myself away from negative people, books, movies, etc. Life's too short to indulge in misery of any kind. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As long as you don't bury your head in the sand and take good advice and stay indoors! I liked your tenacity here to enjoy the flowers and be happy though, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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As long as you don't bury your head in the sand and take good advice and stay indoors! I liked your tenacity here to enjoy the flowers and be happy though, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you. It works for me. 8-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a perfect example of this complicated style, Yvonne. Your words are in perfect order as to syllable count. There is great flow from line to line and verse to verse. Your words are descriptive, there is some rhyme and alliteration, and your message is loud and clear. You are right there are many more enjoyable 'things' to see in nature rather than sit and listen to rumors. Your spiral verses create a perfect spiral (like the nonet when done right). Your image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for sharing a super example of this style. Respectfully, Jan
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What a perfect example of this complicated style, Yvonne. Your words are in perfect order as to syllable count. There is great flow from line to line and verse to verse. Your words are descriptive, there is some rhyme and alliteration, and your message is loud and clear. You are right there are many more enjoyable 'things' to see in nature rather than sit and listen to rumors. Your spiral verses create a perfect spiral (like the nonet when done right). Your image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for sharing a super example of this style. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. You've made my day!
