If I . . .
A Finoacci Spiral Poem for Potlatch Poetry21 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, Yvonne. I like the form and your wonderful poem. Rumors and gossip are things to stay away from. Illustration is dynamic combined with your words. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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This is excellent, Yvonne. I like the form and your wonderful poem. Rumors and gossip are things to stay away from. Illustration is dynamic combined with your words. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, I am with you...you have to stay
in a positive mind...if you don't you live a
unhappy life...I love your poem my sweet friend...
and love your picture...very well written...God Bless...
and stay safe sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hi Yvonne, I am with you...you have to stay
in a positive mind...if you don't you live a
unhappy life...I love your poem my sweet friend...
and love your picture...very well written...God Bless...
and stay safe sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you. Good to hear from you.
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good to hear from you too...I had to take some time off for a while...had some eye surgery...but all is well...love xxoo
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Glad to know you're okay.
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I am...thank you...xxoo love
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Totally agree with what you are saying in your well penned Fibonacci Spiral poem Yvonne. I was talking to a friend (she's 92) whose son wanted her to stay inside her one roomed unit, she more or less told him what you have said in your write. Loved this one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Totally agree with what you are saying in your well penned Fibonacci Spiral poem Yvonne. I was talking to a friend (she's 92) whose son wanted her to stay inside her one roomed unit, she more or less told him what you have said in your write. Loved this one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Good for her! Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Looks like this follows that Fibonacci sequence form well. I just kind of counted syllables toward the beginning and toward the ending. I always thought old stick was old shtick. It's sort of a funny idiom, I mean. You have a cute rhyme with happier and snappier. Fun post.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Looks like this follows that Fibonacci sequence form well. I just kind of counted syllables toward the beginning and toward the ending. I always thought old stick was old shtick. It's sort of a funny idiom, I mean. You have a cute rhyme with happier and snappier. Fun post.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from judiverse
Good advice. You're right. It doesn't pay to listen to the rumors, all the gloom and doom. You have a great suggestion to focus on the good things about us. Otherwise, we would become sick. Focus on the flowers and the birds that are reminding us of spring. Excellent work with this Fibonacci sequence. I saw another example yesterday, and yours is so well presented and looks excellent on the page. judi
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Good advice. You're right. It doesn't pay to listen to the rumors, all the gloom and doom. You have a great suggestion to focus on the good things about us. Otherwise, we would become sick. Focus on the flowers and the birds that are reminding us of spring. Excellent work with this Fibonacci sequence. I saw another example yesterday, and yours is so well presented and looks excellent on the page. judi
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely compliments. I tend to stay away from anything negative, gloomy, or sad.
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You're welcome. It's hard to stay positive, but we've got to try. I've heard that the next two or three weeks are going to be the tough ones, and maybe there'll be relief after that; judi
Comment from Sally Law
A lovely offering and presentation. I love form poetry. All sunny in yellow to cheer us all. Thank you. I really appreciate your view today. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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A lovely offering and presentation. I love form poetry. All sunny in yellow to cheer us all. Thank you. I really appreciate your view today. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you. We need to stay positive. Hope you are all well and safe.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the words you choose and the artwork is a perfect match
Your words are what we need to hear it will sure make our live more pleasant
If we obey the rules as they were explain, soon we will have happier days
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I love the words you choose and the artwork is a perfect match
Your words are what we need to hear it will sure make our live more pleasant
If we obey the rules as they were explain, soon we will have happier days
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Miss Cookie. I'm glad you agree.
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Amen, till next time.
Stay safe.
Cookie
Comment from June Sargent
I totally agree. What a waste of time it is to listen to gossip! There are so many other pursuits that can fill our days. Just look out the window - spring is almost here. Let's focus on tulips!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I totally agree. What a waste of time it is to listen to gossip! There are so many other pursuits that can fill our days. Just look out the window - spring is almost here. Let's focus on tulips!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You are so right! There's too many wonderful things to think about other than gossip! Who has time for that?
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Finoacci Spiral Poem for Potlatch Poetry
If I . . .
by damommy
Hello, my friend,
I enjoyed reading If I. It's very well written and I like the Fibonacci spiral style. You did well with the potlatch poetry challenge.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A Finoacci Spiral Poem for Potlatch Poetry
If I . . .
by damommy
Hello, my friend,
I enjoyed reading If I. It's very well written and I like the Fibonacci spiral style. You did well with the potlatch poetry challenge.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
Comment from Cindy Decker
A very nice poem. How true if we'd all be small and gossip. This is a wonderful work--the message is simple, but it's a very difficult format. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A very nice poem. How true if we'd all be small and gossip. This is a wonderful work--the message is simple, but it's a very difficult format. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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You?re welcome.
Blessings
