My Escape
The journey to follow one's heart in opposition.10 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I read this poem three times. It sounds like an older person in love, but held back by fear of leaving people, places and things. Sometimes love has to take first place. Whatever must be left so he/she can have lone last time is worth it if the love will last 'til death do we part.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I read this poem three times. It sounds like an older person in love, but held back by fear of leaving people, places and things. Sometimes love has to take first place. Whatever must be left so he/she can have lone last time is worth it if the love will last 'til death do we part.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Yeah. That's exactly what it is! 🙂
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I'm trying to learn how to read and understand poetry. Be patient with me as I practice on you. Ha ha.
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LOL
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Escape, has the required words and requires the reader to jump the shoals of time and find that new goal that represents a future we can put renewed effort into achieving.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This poem, My Escape, has the required words and requires the reader to jump the shoals of time and find that new goal that represents a future we can put renewed effort into achieving.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
My Escape
Hello my friend
Well done my friend. This is a fine entry for the poem with these words contest. I like the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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My Escape
Hello my friend
Well done my friend. This is a fine entry for the poem with these words contest. I like the presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is dramatically descriptive and thought-provoking, conveying a powerful message about our needs and desires and how we acquire them.
As your poem says, time is of the essence.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Your poem is dramatically descriptive and thought-provoking, conveying a powerful message about our needs and desires and how we acquire them.
As your poem says, time is of the essence.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A pretty good job writing a poem with designated words to be included. I like the picture you chose to put with your poem. It's a bit interesting! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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A pretty good job writing a poem with designated words to be included. I like the picture you chose to put with your poem. It's a bit interesting! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from samandlancelot
I like your connection between physical running, running out of time and running towards your wish and dream. You used the required words well.
Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I like your connection between physical running, running out of time and running towards your wish and dream. You used the required words well.
Patricia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our memories can sometimes haunt and bring us down but forgiving the past goes a long way to freeing oneself from the hurt and regret, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Our memories can sometimes haunt and bring us down but forgiving the past goes a long way to freeing oneself from the hurt and regret, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from padumachitta
Good morning.
A good entry for the contest. Good luck in the voting.
A thoughtful, thought provoking poem.
Odd bunch of words put to good use.
Stay safe, be well.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Good morning.
A good entry for the contest. Good luck in the voting.
A thoughtful, thought provoking poem.
Odd bunch of words put to good use.
Stay safe, be well.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gideon300
I really like the drama you put into this poem. You can feel the desperation and the seer will to win. Acknowledging fear of people, places and time but still willing to knock it aside and press on to their hearts dream.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I really like the drama you put into this poem. You can feel the desperation and the seer will to win. Acknowledging fear of people, places and time but still willing to knock it aside and press on to their hearts dream.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank You!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I like the ocean between past and future hopes and drinking the wine of fear--fresh imagery. Re the cement--consider skipping the keeping you back--just holding you down. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I like the ocean between past and future hopes and drinking the wine of fear--fresh imagery. Re the cement--consider skipping the keeping you back--just holding you down. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thank you Liz!
