No more walkies !
80 word flash fiction10 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun post. I enjoyed reading this little story. I like the POV of the dog. Your dialogue is great. I do hope the ending here will come soon for the world and the virus will be history. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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What a fun post. I enjoyed reading this little story. I like the POV of the dog. Your dialogue is great. I do hope the ending here will come soon for the world and the virus will be history. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for those encouraging words - let's hope this virus disappears soon ! zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No more pet walkies, as if they (the pets) are also aware of the gravity of COVID 19 and are on their way of feeling their action participation in the struggle for survival.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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No more pet walkies, as if they (the pets) are also aware of the gravity of COVID 19 and are on their way of feeling their action participation in the struggle for survival.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Bichon
This was a really fun read! I think my own dog, Lacey would relate to Spotty well. I've been taking her out everyday now for little walks, and I think she's sick of it!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This was a really fun read! I think my own dog, Lacey would relate to Spotty well. I've been taking her out everyday now for little walks, and I think she's sick of it!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for sharing - glad you enjoyed it ! zanya
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's hard when the only thing you can do is take the dog out. It's funny how we all wish to be home and not go to work and such but once we're given the opportunity to do so we go crazy. I broke my foot a month ago, I'm a pro at keeping myself busy in the house now. I go back to work in two weeks and I'm so not prepared. lol
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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It's hard when the only thing you can do is take the dog out. It's funny how we all wish to be home and not go to work and such but once we're given the opportunity to do so we go crazy. I broke my foot a month ago, I'm a pro at keeping myself busy in the house now. I go back to work in two weeks and I'm so not prepared. lol
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Yes indeed - thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image, zanya,
and a good story to go with it.
-I like how you tell it
with dialogue, including that
of Spotty.
-He sounds likes like
quite a character, but
he seems to be making
a point that no one is
paying attention to him.
-I like how you give clues,
but give nothing away until the end!
-I like the line there will be
"no more w-a-l-k-i-e-s"
for anyone, including Jennifer!
-Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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-Great image, zanya,
and a good story to go with it.
-I like how you tell it
with dialogue, including that
of Spotty.
-He sounds likes like
quite a character, but
he seems to be making
a point that no one is
paying attention to him.
-I like how you give clues,
but give nothing away until the end!
-I like the line there will be
"no more w-a-l-k-i-e-s"
for anyone, including Jennifer!
-Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
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You are welcome, zanya.
Comment from Jed Fern
This took me a while to comprehend, especially the middle part. If there was supposed to be two different scenes, it could have been made more clearer. Otherwise, I do sympathize with both characters, as I can see where both of them are coming from. Otherwise, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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This took me a while to comprehend, especially the middle part. If there was supposed to be two different scenes, it could have been made more clearer. Otherwise, I do sympathize with both characters, as I can see where both of them are coming from. Otherwise, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Spotty', Answorth --> Spotty,' Answorth
Spaniel, growled --> Spaniel growled
Suddenly his phone --> Suddenly, his phone
on over Jennifer --> on over, Jennifer
shouted, 'no more --> shouted, 'No more
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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A fun offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Spotty', Answorth --> Spotty,' Answorth
Spaniel, growled --> Spaniel growled
Suddenly his phone --> Suddenly, his phone
on over Jennifer --> on over, Jennifer
shouted, 'no more --> shouted, 'No more
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Thank you for the chuckle and the smile. I guess everyone doesn't want to go out. I loved the whimsical artwork chosen here. It is the perfect compliment to this piece. I'm sure your readers will appreciate your bringing a little levity to such a grave circumstance. Kudos!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the chuckle and the smile. I guess everyone doesn't want to go out. I loved the whimsical artwork chosen here. It is the perfect compliment to this piece. I'm sure your readers will appreciate your bringing a little levity to such a grave circumstance. Kudos!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Great review -much appreciated zanya
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You're welcome!
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You're very welcome
Comment from Puzzle
Oh poor spotty!!! He is sick of walking lol!!! This was a cute little story. I like the perception from the dog's point of view. Maybe our pets are getting sick of us!!! Good job
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Oh poor spotty!!! He is sick of walking lol!!! This was a cute little story. I like the perception from the dog's point of view. Maybe our pets are getting sick of us!!! Good job
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2020
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Puzzle
Oh poor spotty!!! He is sick of walking lol!!! This was a cute little story. I like the perception from the dog's point of view. Maybe our pets are getting sick of us!!! Good job
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Oh poor spotty!!! He is sick of walking lol!!! This was a cute little story. I like the perception from the dog's point of view. Maybe our pets are getting sick of us!!! Good job
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2020
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Thanks for reading - apology for late response ! zanya
