Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Really great pictures! Also like the set-up leading into the covenant's involvement. You have it all tied in together very nicely. Wonderful job! Looking forward to seeing how it transpires in your next chapter.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thank you, Faye :)

I'm glad you liked the photos. I wasn't sure what to add to this chapter. Yes, the Covenant will have to help out my detectives with Jena's situation. Things are fixing to get dicey, and the Breedline have another situation they are going to have to deal with other than Jena's sticky situation. I appreciate your time you take to read my chapters. I enjoy your feedback.
Stay safe in these trying times my friend.

Thanks again!
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 30-Mar-2020

May you also stay safe. I look forward to your next chapter with great expectations.
Hugs ❣️,
Faye

Comment from cdefan

Excellent

Thrilling scene with the two detectives. Too bad they are left with Jena's leftovers. Lol!
Maybe the Breedline can help them figure something out. Now I'm wondering what they will tell Carrie since she witnessed Jena's werewolf. Good stuff!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thank you, cdefan :)

Glad to hear back from you again. I was hoping you would enjoye another episode of my Breedline adventures. Stay tuned... more to come.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

This is a very well-written interesting chapter. I love how you added a bit of humor throughout, the friendly banter between the detectives. Their feelings on the marriage, the situation, how you slyly slid in a little backstory. Very nicely done as always.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thank you Mistydawn :)

Your feedback always thrills me. You seem to see more of the story and the little things I'm always hoping the reader will catch. Thanks for taking the time to step into my Breedline adventures. I need to buckle down and get more chapters in. I'm starting to fall behind due to my work schedule changing. Stay safe in these trying times my friend.

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from ngage

Excellent

Wow, Ms Shana! Exciting and gruesome chapter! I like the horror/thriller in this series.
Looks like the two detectives have their work cut out. Hopefully the Covenant can give them a hand cleaning Jena's mess up.
Great writing. I enjoyed the title and artwork too!

Nate

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thanks, Nate :)

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the horror scenes in this chapter. I was hoping it wouldn't offend anyone. I do like to write those parts. It brings out the challenge in my writing. Stay tuned... more to come!
Stay safe my friend!

Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Your craft in writing is so mighty, even like other characters, here I find Manual is an interesting and real character to contribute to the plot development so freely with flow in tune with the plot in orderly maturation; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thank you, Alcreator Litt Dear :)

I'm thrilled to hear your feedback. I do enjoy writing about my detectives. They have become a big part in my series.
Stay tuned... more to come!
Be safe in these trying times my friend,
Shana :)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

Your chapter is very good and I didn't find any mistakes. It was fast-moving, your characters appropriate and the dialogue is good. I look forward to reading more. Stay Healthy. Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Thank you, Shirley :)

I'm happy to hear you are looking forward to continuing the story. It sure has been hectic with everything going on. I'm hoping everyone will stay healthy and safe. I seem to be falling behind in my writing due to work schedule changes. Hopefully I can catch up so I can share here. I will be praying for you and all my friends here on FanStory.

Thanks for reading my story. I appreciate your feedback.
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Another great episode, Frank and Manuel have a real problem with Jena leaving bits of bodies lying around, but they are going to take it up with the covenant, It's good to hear that Lailah and Roman are about to tie the knot. You are such an incurable Romantic, but I believe that's the way it should be too. A fabulous episode Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020

Awww... thank you dear friend :)

Yes, Frank and Manuel have their work cut out. Thank goodness they have the Breedline to help them out. Not only do they have to worry about Jena... they have the Shadow to deal with.
Thanks again for taking the time to give me feedback. You are always motivating to me. I appreciate you.

Be safe and stay healthy. I know God watches over you.
Always you fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 29-Mar-2020

Bless you Shana