Kneel, Pray
If there has ever been a time we need to put God first...61 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This pandemic is horrifically unique. Predictions about its duration are being made, but only God knows when He will take it away. Your poem is very creatively composed and timely in its descriptions.
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This pandemic is horrifically unique. Predictions about its duration are being made, but only God knows when He will take it away. Your poem is very creatively composed and timely in its descriptions.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Janice, We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from nancyjam
Nice use of this unusual form, conveying fears of the current virus scare
and praying to God for Grace to give us the faith and the strength to get through it.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Nice use of this unusual form, conveying fears of the current virus scare
and praying to God for Grace to give us the faith and the strength to get through it.
Beautiful presentation.
Nancy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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NAncy, I am pleased you reviewed and commented, thank you!
Comment from simonbagh
That's a very nice approach to the problem we have to bring our voices together to pray Got and beg Him to solve the problem I enjoyed reading well done
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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That's a very nice approach to the problem we have to bring our voices together to pray Got and beg Him to solve the problem I enjoyed reading well done
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, how this poem rolls and cascades like the waterfalls, taking on a ride through the corona virus to a place of faith. I have never seen the fibanachi done so well.
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Oh, how this poem rolls and cascades like the waterfalls, taking on a ride through the corona virus to a place of faith. I have never seen the fibanachi done so well.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Darlene, I am so very honored by your six-star review and comments.
We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
This, my friend with kindness. It is heart felt and clearly understandable.
I believe you have found the cure for this awful virus. Our Lord is the way.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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This, my friend with kindness. It is heart felt and clearly understandable.
I believe you have found the cure for this awful virus. Our Lord is the way.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Willie, I am so humbled by your six-star validation! We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
Lovely and timely piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Its presentation is particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR,
Lovely and timely piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Its presentation is particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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RP I so much value your kind review. Thank you!
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What a glorious looking poem with so much meaning. You seem to have met the criteria. Your pleading with God should be echoed by all. This is a time for prayer and contemplation.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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What a glorious looking poem with so much meaning. You seem to have met the criteria. Your pleading with God should be echoed by all. This is a time for prayer and contemplation.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Raffaellina, I am very grateful for your kind review. We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellently executed. I really enjoyed this inspired verse saturated with hope, faith and reverence. This is indeed a very good time to pray. Thank you for sharing at such a time as this. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Excellently executed. I really enjoyed this inspired verse saturated with hope, faith and reverence. This is indeed a very good time to pray. Thank you for sharing at such a time as this. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Brenda, Thank you for the validation. We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Powerful; masterful presentation and vivid imagery. In your skillful hands, the predictable words that pertain to prayer pack a punch. I love the roaring waterfall and the spiral presentation. Cheers. LIZ
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Powerful; masterful presentation and vivid imagery. In your skillful hands, the predictable words that pertain to prayer pack a punch. I love the roaring waterfall and the spiral presentation. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Liz, I appreciate you strong validation! We will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Kneel, Pray
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
You did an outstanding job with the Fibonacci spiral challenge. It looks and sounds great. I never read one before. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Kneel, Pray
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
You did an outstanding job with the Fibonacci spiral challenge. It looks and sounds great. I never read one before. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Gypsy, my thanks for your validation, we will have our prayers answered, we always do even though we might not realize it at the time.
