Kneel, Pray
If there has ever been a time we need to put God first...61 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your Fibonacci Spiritual Spiral poem is written with emotion and passion JLR. A plea for the end of this pandemic that sees us all isolated. thanks for sharing,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Your Fibonacci Spiritual Spiral poem is written with emotion and passion JLR. A plea for the end of this pandemic that sees us all isolated. thanks for sharing,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Valda, thank you continue to be safe and hold great hope for this to pass.
Comment from RShipp
You selected a great illustration to accompany your poem.
"carrying away my feelings of uncertainty" What a descriptive phrase!
"If my name was a ...." was a wonderful beginning line. If I were still teaching, this would be a great poem entry for my seventh graders!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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You selected a great illustration to accompany your poem.
"carrying away my feelings of uncertainty" What a descriptive phrase!
"If my name was a ...." was a wonderful beginning line. If I were still teaching, this would be a great poem entry for my seventh graders!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Here is the rest of the excercise;
If my name we are a color it with be like___________
If my name were a sound it should sound like____________
If my name we a taster is would taste like___________
If my name we a texture is would feel like_________
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Thanks!
Comment from Rylie McBride
I loved the poem and thought it was very timely to the world today. I loved how it brought us from you to God. It also had a very powerful call to action.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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I loved the poem and thought it was very timely to the world today. I loved how it brought us from you to God. It also had a very powerful call to action.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Rylie, thank you for your kind words.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Kneel, Pray", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. What this talented poet has penned, eloquently covers what so many of us feel. A terrible sense of "What's gone wrong?" To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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"Kneel, Pray", is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. What this talented poet has penned, eloquently covers what so many of us feel. A terrible sense of "What's gone wrong?" To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Duchess, I am very appreciative of your six-star validation.
Comment from Debbie Perry
Very beautiful and true.
We all need to kneel and pray everyday about everything in our life.
Bible says,
If the world would kneel and pray to God he hears us and answers our prayers.
Well done,
Debbie Perry
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Very beautiful and true.
We all need to kneel and pray everyday about everything in our life.
Bible says,
If the world would kneel and pray to God he hears us and answers our prayers.
Well done,
Debbie Perry
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Debbie, I love your validation, thank you!
Comment from MARIANNE GI
Very nice, now in these difficult days it is a very good message to lay our fears to God, to feel hope and turn bad to good. Congratulations, very nice indeed
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Very nice, now in these difficult days it is a very good message to lay our fears to God, to feel hope and turn bad to good. Congratulations, very nice indeed
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Marianne, thank you for reviewing and commenting.
Comment from Puzzle
Fantastic job!! I find writing in this style so difficult! This is beautifully written. I love the message and I love the layout your chose to go with the piece. Good job!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Fantastic job!! I find writing in this style so difficult! This is beautifully written. I love the message and I love the layout your chose to go with the piece. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Puzzle, I delight that you found this pleasing. Thank you.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Amen! We have to write more because of site requirement, but really, AMEN says it all. You have stated beautifully where we all need to be, kneeling in prayer for the blood of Christ to cover us. Be safe my friend and stay as healthy as possible! xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Amen! We have to write more because of site requirement, but really, AMEN says it all. You have stated beautifully where we all need to be, kneeling in prayer for the blood of Christ to cover us. Be safe my friend and stay as healthy as possible! xoxo
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Diana and so another week begins and we remain steadfast in our hopes and prayers that these times will result in a more loving and harmonious society. May the sun shine on your back guiding you toward your loved ones this week.
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is very well composed, Jim. I saw this interesting form listed as the Potlatch challenge. Since we have no control over anything but to stay home, we may find the best thing is to kneel and pray. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Your poem is very well composed, Jim. I saw this interesting form listed as the Potlatch challenge. Since we have no control over anything but to stay home, we may find the best thing is to kneel and pray. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Marilyn, I have been reflecting on the vast numbers of people worldwide doing just that bowing before there maker. There has to be good that will result from this. Be safe, sent with loving kindness. Jim
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Hi Jim. Yes, we are all in this together. Best wishes back to you, too. Marilyn
Comment from Raul1
This is a well written poem. I like this poetry. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Thanks for sharing! Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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This is a well written poem. I like this poetry. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job. Thanks for sharing! Well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you Raul, hope you are hunkering down and safe in doing so.
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You're welcome! :)
