Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Nice entry, is this story related to the new kid on the block - Corona? Anyway I enjoyed reading this story, good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020

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Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

This is a very powerful testimony. This is the difference between those who are conscious and those who are unconscious. The unconscious never feel enough and need to fill that void with greed and egocentricity. The conscious are there for others.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

75 words
Last Roll and Testament

Hello, my friend,

I really like your short flash fiction, it's funny. The presentation is perfect for it. I want to do the arts and crafts with my grandson lol Good job with the word count.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this. The roll is under pressure, losing to many friends who seem to be in short supply as it is. I think that this is the end. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I loved the idea of the toilet paper and what it might feel like to be the last roll. Hopefully, everyone is done hoarding toilet paper and the rest of the people can get some now.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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Comment from TheManojArora

Needs Improvement

Decent attempt. I liked the POV. There wasn't much else. By the way, I don't think 'greediness' is a word. it should be 'greed'.

All the best for the contest then! Keep writing. Cheers! :)

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020

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Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

If I had a six for this, you'd be sporting it! This is GOLD, and I absolutely loved it. "Last Roll and Testament" - what a clever title, and what a clever way of personifying toilet rolls in the midst of so much, and TOO much seeeeriousness. I hope this wins! It's got my vote anyway. Good luck. I hope you don't end up drowning although the alternative is...well, DROWNING IN VOTES!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020

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Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent humorous story for the flash contest.
The world will never be the same when the last roll is gone.
Excellent picture to match the words.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt.
This tells short story is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020

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Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Ah, and who would have believed our civilization would be laid low for a lack of toilet paper. A sad commentary.
I like your story. And I wish you good luck with the voters.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020

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