Good Bye
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What an intense contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your topic is well-expressed. You told a great little story in the space allowed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Good Bye--->Goodbye
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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What an intense contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your topic is well-expressed. You told a great little story in the space allowed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Good Bye--->Goodbye
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt.
This short story about a tragic love lost is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt.
This short story about a tragic love lost is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Sharon for your wonderful support.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt.
This short story about a tragic love lost is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 75 Word Flash writing prompt.
This short story about a tragic love lost is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, Good Bye, has the right word count but confuses me as to whom is being addressed. You begin saying --They told us he was in remission.-- Then you are speaking to another about smiling from their coffin. Same person also dead?
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This seventy-five-word story, Good Bye, has the right word count but confuses me as to whom is being addressed. You begin saying --They told us he was in remission.-- Then you are speaking to another about smiling from their coffin. Same person also dead?
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Same person that was in remission, died. Thank you so much Mr. Bill for your review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This account plays with the imagination of the reader. It also may invite the reader to examine their wishes and longings to be fulfilled in the same way as accounted here. Well thought out.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This account plays with the imagination of the reader. It also may invite the reader to examine their wishes and longings to be fulfilled in the same way as accounted here. Well thought out.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Liz
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting entry for the 75 words flash fiction contest. My favourite words are
"my biggest regret is time. I didn't have enough time".
I don't have as unhappy an experience to go through as you, but this is my permanent lament... even at the moment when everyone around me is bored and seems to have nothing to do. I am over -active and under-rested.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This is an interesting entry for the 75 words flash fiction contest. My favourite words are
"my biggest regret is time. I didn't have enough time".
I don't have as unhappy an experience to go through as you, but this is my permanent lament... even at the moment when everyone around me is bored and seems to have nothing to do. I am over -active and under-rested.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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That makes two of us:) Thank you so much for stopping bye and reviewing.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good entry on how sudden death affects those remaining. Death is a abrupt jolt to the senses even when we know it is coming. Only God knows how to truly comfort.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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This is a good entry on how sudden death affects those remaining. Death is a abrupt jolt to the senses even when we know it is coming. Only God knows how to truly comfort.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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thank you the much Rebecca
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You're welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good job with telling your story. It's not easy to say a whole lot in so few words, but you did it. I don't know who Angel was, but I'm sorry for your loss!
Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Good job with telling your story. It's not easy to say a whole lot in so few words, but you did it. I don't know who Angel was, but I'm sorry for your loss!
Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Ms. Patty
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good Bye
Hello, my friend,
You have 76 words for the 75 word flash fiction.
I like the story even though is a bit dark. You managed to tell a complete story in 76 words. Good job.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Good Bye
Hello, my friend,
You have 76 words for the 75 word flash fiction.
I like the story even though is a bit dark. You managed to tell a complete story in 76 words. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
It seems that we never have enough of this, do we? The things that we're trying to get to with so many things on our plates cause us to forget some things that are really important to us. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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It seems that we never have enough of this, do we? The things that we're trying to get to with so many things on our plates cause us to forget some things that are really important to us. I like this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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You are so right, and when you are on a different continent is even harder.
