Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I have a friend who has epilepsy so I immediately thought of that condition when I read your succinct and descriptive words. That's a graphic image - my brain feels like that sometimes when I'm writing, but I don't have seizures thank goodness!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review Lisa. I have epilepsy myself and see a lot of it through my work. Some of it ain't pretty
Geoff

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds a bit painful and scary, I wish you luck with the contest and hope this is not autobiographical, stay safe and keep your head out of trouble, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review. This is both auto and biographical as I have epilepsy and see a lot of it through work
Geoff

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with you contest entry. It is difficult to write something cohesive in the allowed space. However, your words speak volumes about what the brain experiences during that time. Your picture is perfect for your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review, Jan. Much appreciated.
Geoff

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

Awe. Yes epilepsy really stinks. My husband has it. And there is so much more to it then even the seizures themselves. Lots of mood swings and issues with meds. It's just not a fun disease at all. Good work.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review. Through personal and work experience I see quite a bit of this and you're right, not pretty.
Geoff

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the One Line Poem contest.
But, I find the red on grey a little bit hard to read.
Otherwise, well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020

Thanks Sharon. I've changed the background. Should be easier to read now.
Geoff

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

What an amazing one liner you just described the equation of the human heart and brain. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Geoff