Uncertain
A first for a while22 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Chris,
*smile* This piece made me smile... I read along and kept expecting a rhyme to pop in or some fine meter -- but no. It seems your plan was to just shake us awake and let us know you (and your wit) were still alive and doing well. I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Chris,
*smile* This piece made me smile... I read along and kept expecting a rhyme to pop in or some fine meter -- but no. It seems your plan was to just shake us awake and let us know you (and your wit) were still alive and doing well. I enjoyed!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Robyn Thanks for your review and I never know what I will come up with but thought I would do an 8.6.10 meter with every 3rd line rhyming must not have worked ,Ha Ha ,never mind it woke up my brain anyway. next time hey
Hope you are all doing OK where you are. Like everyone we are all trying to stay indoors and keep well . worrying times at the moment and I have taken time off to help with my grands and my Mum who needs some care with houswork and shopping etc. So may have more time to write also
Stay safe and well Robyn and family Cheers and hipugs Chris
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Oops. I'm sorry. But I was working on my post. PLEASE read it.
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Ha ha will do
Comment from pharp
Chris,
I can understand how your feel, my friend. I am praying your muse will return soon. For me the writing takes my mind off of so much, it gives me peace within my mind and spirit. I'm confined to my house because of my immune system, and health issues.
I'm so use to having the grand kids over every weekend, they are missed. Three weeks now in the house, I just continue to pray and write. Stay safe and well my friend.
Lots of love...Portia
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Chris,
I can understand how your feel, my friend. I am praying your muse will return soon. For me the writing takes my mind off of so much, it gives me peace within my mind and spirit. I'm confined to my house because of my immune system, and health issues.
I'm so use to having the grand kids over every weekend, they are missed. Three weeks now in the house, I just continue to pray and write. Stay safe and well my friend.
Lots of love...Portia
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Portia, Thanks so much for your lovely review and perhaps I can get motivated to write some more. I am taking time away from my nursing work to help mind my grandkids and look after my Mum in this troubled times..Trying to stay at home as much as I can also. You look after yourself also and the grankids will be missing you too. We are in this together my friend Stay safe and welll Cheers and love Chris
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Uncertain
by Chrissy710
Hello, Christine,
How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am okay but also feeling the stress of the virus and quarantine (stay safe at home). I suffered from deep depression for two years and I could not write at all. I am doing much better. Good job with your poem. I can't tell a writer's block. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Uncertain
by Chrissy710
Hello, Christine,
How are you? I hope you and your family are doing well. I am okay but also feeling the stress of the virus and quarantine (stay safe at home). I suffered from deep depression for two years and I could not write at all. I am doing much better. Good job with your poem. I can't tell a writer's block. Stay safe.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Gypsy, Thank you and we are doing OK here in Ballarat trying to go out only when needed. I have taken time off work to help look after my grandkids as my daughter has to work. Depression is awful to cope with and perhaps writing is a relief to express outpr feelings. You stay safe and well my friend Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks to you and your muse for writing and letting us know that you're okay. You're one of the heroes during these difficult times. Please be sure to protect yourself well when you help your patients.
"I seem to have some writers block" (writer's)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thanks to you and your muse for writing and letting us know that you're okay. You're one of the heroes during these difficult times. Please be sure to protect yourself well when you help your patients.
"I seem to have some writers block" (writer's)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Helen, Thanks for you review and I knew ai should have put the ' in writers So have corrected writer's now LOL . I have taken time off work at the moment to help my daughter with the kids as she has to work. So ai am fortunate that ai can do this . This crisis is global and we all have to look after each other so stay safe and well my friend Cheers Chrisx
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Glad you don't have to work and can bless you grandchildren this way! ♥
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you have woken up with this write and tempted your brain into writing a rhyming poem Christine and more will follow I am sure, much enjoyed, you stay safe too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I think you have woken up with this write and tempted your brain into writing a rhyming poem Christine and more will follow I am sure, much enjoyed, you stay safe too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Dolly, Thanks for your review And hopefully I will write soon and You also stay safe and well . We are all trying to isolate as much as possible scary times at the moment with more cases every day. This may be the forum to communicate. Many Cheers Chrisx
Comment from royowen
This is where I can understand your apprehension, our kids, well meaning, have told us that we have to go into hibernation, heh heh, bless their hearts. But the gift is always there, just taking a holiday. I do a lot of my reviewing before the sun rises, but it's also when the best ideas come, if I don't rise, with the flash of inspiration, as quick as it comes, it's gone, should have seen me the other, I kept rushing to write something, but so far, nothing today. Heh heh, I tell people if you haven't got something to write about, write about that, and you've done that. Well done Chris, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is where I can understand your apprehension, our kids, well meaning, have told us that we have to go into hibernation, heh heh, bless their hearts. But the gift is always there, just taking a holiday. I do a lot of my reviewing before the sun rises, but it's also when the best ideas come, if I don't rise, with the flash of inspiration, as quick as it comes, it's gone, should have seen me the other, I kept rushing to write something, but so far, nothing today. Heh heh, I tell people if you haven't got something to write about, write about that, and you've done that. Well done Chris, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Roy How are you all doing in SA Keeping in doors like us here .Only going out for supplies. Have had a lull in writing just havent felt motivated lately. However I should have more time as ai have taken time off work to help look after my grandies for my daughter who has to work. Maybe this is a start but also finding it very expensive to post and promote work here on FS it cost me $39 Aussie dollars to buy $25 FS dollars and they went quick so wont be spending much money and I cant review enough to make enough money to keep my work on pages one or two.
Stay safe and well Roy and family Cheers Chrisxx
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Thanks for catching up, we?re doing the same as you here, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment from aryr
I think you did rather well with this poem. I am so glad your muse won out on this one. I agree it is a trying time for all but your words were both inspirational and reminded us that we are all in this together. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I think you did rather well with this poem. I am so glad your muse won out on this one. I agree it is a trying time for all but your words were both inspirational and reminded us that we are all in this together. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Ary Thanks very much for your words amd yes we all in this together so must look after our world and people So stay safe and well my lovely GS friend Cheers Chrisxx
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You are so welcome Christine, be safe.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Chrissy, You are not alone - I, and probably a lot more are feeling just like you. The stress of this awful period in time is starting to get us. I like what you write - opening up your heart reassures others who are feeling just like you. Keep that smile on your face - take care and good wishes to you and yours. Love Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello Chrissy, You are not alone - I, and probably a lot more are feeling just like you. The stress of this awful period in time is starting to get us. I like what you write - opening up your heart reassures others who are feeling just like you. Keep that smile on your face - take care and good wishes to you and yours. Love Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Dorothy, Thank so much and I am sure there are many out there felling a bit lost and a bit scared at our durrent crisis. We all meed to look out fro each other and perhaps writing will keep us in touch as well Look after you and yours also Stay safe and well my friend Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Chris.
-Everyone is being
impacted by this awful
situation, but at least FS
is a way to share feelings.
-I think you and your muse
did a great job with this poem.
-Good imagery, meter, and rhyme.
-I like your lines about what
types of things you could write.
-I like the concluding verse, too,
and I am glad your muse is
in high gear, as well as your brain!
-Hope all is well with
you and your family.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Chris.
-Everyone is being
impacted by this awful
situation, but at least FS
is a way to share feelings.
-I think you and your muse
did a great job with this poem.
-Good imagery, meter, and rhyme.
-I like your lines about what
types of things you could write.
-I like the concluding verse, too,
and I am glad your muse is
in high gear, as well as your brain!
-Hope all is well with
you and your family.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Pam, Thanks heaps for your review and yes we are trying to keep well and safe amongst this awful time we are all facing . My brain needed an outlet sometimes words just come quickly other times I drag them out LOL Oh well whatever works hey LOL , stay safe and well Pam and family Cheers My friend Chrisxx
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You are very welcome, Chris. I think my brain needs a lot of outlets! Thanks for sharing.
Comment from Puzzle
Ugh I feel your pain. I go through periods where I have so much material and I don't know where to start. And then I have some periods where I have nothing to write about!!! Good job! Don't stop writing!!!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Ugh I feel your pain. I go through periods where I have so much material and I don't know where to start. And then I have some periods where I have nothing to write about!!! Good job! Don't stop writing!!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hi Puzzle, Thanks so much and nice to meet you. I will try to keep writing have a few ideas just need to get them down. Stay safe and well in these trying times Cheers Christine
