Uncertain
A first for a while22 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
It sounds like ya got the brain back on track! I hate it when I can't figure out what to write about or the right words to put to it. I'm best to just walk away for a bit and I'll be back at the keyboard by midnight! LOL
Stay safe! Stay healthy!
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
It sounds like ya got the brain back on track! I hate it when I can't figure out what to write about or the right words to put to it. I'm best to just walk away for a bit and I'll be back at the keyboard by midnight! LOL
Stay safe! Stay healthy!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Patty, Yes it comes and goes LOL I hadn't written for sometime and though this might kick start it again. You also stay safe and healthy Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the lost feeling of not being able to write as we used to and sometimes feel robbed of the ability to write down our thoughts easily.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
A very well-written poem about the lost feeling of not being able to write as we used to and sometimes feel robbed of the ability to write down our thoughts easily.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra Thanks for your review and now back on track I shall put pen to paper and see what else I can write Many Cheers Chris
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, interesting, and creative. Thank you for
the author's notes - so glad you wrote this poem! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme of this poem. May you be well and safe....Maria
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
The author's words are clear, interesting, and creative. Thank you for
the author's notes - so glad you wrote this poem! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with the theme of this poem. May you be well and safe....Maria
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Maria, Thanks for your review and I think I have found my motivation again so who knows I am sure we all have times when our brain goes AWL LOL Cheers Christine
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Uncertain, brings with it the ironic reality that time crunches provide inspiration and sap words out of moving minds, whereas this stifled state stalls our imagination engines.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
This poem, Uncertain, brings with it the ironic reality that time crunches provide inspiration and sap words out of moving minds, whereas this stifled state stalls our imagination engines.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Bill Thanks for your review I seem to go through lulls in enthuasiam for writing and then can't stop. Plenty of time on my hands at the moment so should dhurn out a few LOL Stay safe and well Cheers Chris
Comment from Aussie
You are not alone in this crisis. The problem we are focusing on the virus. Nothing will ever be the same again. I pick up my painting and have no thoughts of doing any of it. When we are suffering from fear - the only way out it through. Self-isolation is working in Oz, hard but it is working. We have no public transport and only chemist, Dr and supermarkets open.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
You are not alone in this crisis. The problem we are focusing on the virus. Nothing will ever be the same again. I pick up my painting and have no thoughts of doing any of it. When we are suffering from fear - the only way out it through. Self-isolation is working in Oz, hard but it is working. We have no public transport and only chemist, Dr and supermarkets open.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi Aussie, Thanks for your review and Yes thankfully we are not alone as it seems to be all consuming at the moment and yes nothing will be the same however as long as we look after each other and do the right thing we should be fine You get ypur paints out and ai will get my pen Stay safe and well Cheers Chris
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wry and witty. Quick--before your muse goes back to sleep! When my mind goes blank I sit a blank screen and write whatever comes to mind--even drivel can invoke the muse--from there let her take the lead. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
Wry and witty. Quick--before your muse goes back to sleep! When my mind goes blank I sit a blank screen and write whatever comes to mind--even drivel can invoke the muse--from there let her take the lead. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi Liz, Thanks so much and no no more sleep for this muse I shall make her work harder Ha Ha Cheers Christine
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wry and witty. Quick--before your muse goes back to sleep! When my mind goes blank I sit a blank screen and write whatever comes to mind--even drivel can invoke the muse--from there let her take the lead. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
Wry and witty. Quick--before your muse goes back to sleep! When my mind goes blank I sit a blank screen and write whatever comes to mind--even drivel can invoke the muse--from there let her take the lead. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thanks again Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Well you just give your muse the pen, Chris because there are poems to be written and some reviews too.
Excellent start to working through the melancholy and I look forward to more from your quill.
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
Well you just give your muse the pen, Chris because there are poems to be written and some reviews too.
Excellent start to working through the melancholy and I look forward to more from your quill.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi Gloria Thank you dear friend for your review and honour of the six stars. i will get my pen out and see what I can come up with now my brain has woken LOL As always many Cheers Chrisxx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You and your muse wrote this poem well. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow well with a poignant message. I believe you are feeling the effects of being a nurse during this covid-19 and your brain won't let you focus on anything else. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Your muse will return. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
You and your muse wrote this poem well. I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flow well with a poignant message. I believe you are feeling the effects of being a nurse during this covid-19 and your brain won't let you focus on anything else. Thanks for sharing. Stay safe. Your muse will return. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi Jan, Thank you kind lady I enjoyed writing it and gave me something to concentrate on. I have actually taken some leave from my nursing so ai can help look after my granddaughters for my daughter who need to keep working. I hope to go back to work soon as lomg as it is safer Cheers Chris
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. This is a good poem and commentary on the chaos all of us have been thrown into with this virus. Maybe our muse has flown away, but maybe not. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
Hi Christine. This is a good poem and commentary on the chaos all of us have been thrown into with this virus. Maybe our muse has flown away, but maybe not. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hi Marilyn,Thanks and yes perhaps my muse is having a rest but thankfully not completely gone LOL Worrying rimes ahead for us all bit at least we can keep in contact via FS.. Stay safe and welll Cheers Chrisxx