On a Knife-edge
(34 syllables) No place for vertigo!11 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
I was shocked when I read that staunch climbers cling to the edge. I suppose it is quite a challenge to climb that height but it looks quite dangerous. Not a lot of foot room to manoeuvre. Thanks for sharing.
Drew
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I was shocked when I read that staunch climbers cling to the edge. I suppose it is quite a challenge to climb that height but it looks quite dangerous. Not a lot of foot room to manoeuvre. Thanks for sharing.
Drew
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've incorporated lots of alliteration here. The very descriptive wording is superb and very well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
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You've incorporated lots of alliteration here. The very descriptive wording is superb and very well thought out. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I have never seen The Breadknife nor that mountain range. It is interesting and beautiful. My ancestors are Welsh so I especially was struck by both the poem and photo.
Well done!
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I have never seen The Breadknife nor that mountain range. It is interesting and beautiful. My ancestors are Welsh so I especially was struck by both the poem and photo.
Well done!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
On a Knife-edge
Hello my friend
Fine entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. The mountains are very unique in shape. I like your poem. Well done. The presentation is nice too.
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On a Knife-edge
Hello my friend
Fine entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt contest. The mountains are very unique in shape. I like your poem. Well done. The presentation is nice too.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture is beautiful and dangerous looking for any attempt at climbing. Great job with the alliteration of s and c. Great job expressing this 'feeling' in the required syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture is beautiful and dangerous looking for any attempt at climbing. Great job with the alliteration of s and c. Great job expressing this 'feeling' in the required syllable count. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from jenintorre
I really like the imagery in this 34 syllable poem. You describe the artwork well. The poem flows really well with good alliterations. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
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I really like the imagery in this 34 syllable poem. You describe the artwork well. The poem flows really well with good alliterations. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt.
This piece is a good match for the picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 34 Syllables writing prompt.
This piece is a good match for the picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Rmocruz
I must commend you for the abundant employment of alliteration
in this 34 syllable offering. I like the appropriate photo-art selection.
Very nicely crafted overall.
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I must commend you for the abundant employment of alliteration
in this 34 syllable offering. I like the appropriate photo-art selection.
Very nicely crafted overall.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Very interesting. I don't know that I have even seen words so well depicted in a landscape. The photo and verse are a perfect pairing. Good luck in the contest!
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Very interesting. I don't know that I have even seen words so well depicted in a landscape. The photo and verse are a perfect pairing. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fascinating write with good background notes about the picture here. Those climbers who risk their lives for the sake of the climb are brave and sometimes foolish, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fascinating write with good background notes about the picture here. Those climbers who risk their lives for the sake of the climb are brave and sometimes foolish, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
