Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These are deep meaningful words of love Bill and I am impressed by this write and wish I have a six for you, much enjoyed, words from the heart, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020

Thank you, Dolly, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Exceptional

Dear Bill, This is a beautiful love poem that stands alone with out an illustration that only distracts the reader from the beauty and debt of the words you have written.
My first though when looking at the photo you choose was, "what does this have to do with love?" please send the photo to file 13.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

I see your point on the image. Thanks for the suggestion. Bill

reply by Suzanna Ray on 26-Mar-2020

P.S. Did you notice dream stock markings all over the picture? I suspect they wanted you to purchase the photo.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

And who ever said that men aren't true romantics? This is a most heartfelt and tender entry into the love poem contest, Bill.

Really good and I hope the Contest Committee agrees.

Gloria

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thank you, Gloria.

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Time lingers and we embrace!
Awesome powerful message, most appropriate for those getting quarantined together and those going through the tribulations of life alone. Good Luck in the contest Blessings and Prayers to you,

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks, g.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Bill, I am very impressed by this fine poem and wish you much luck in the contest. A sixer if I had one. You're poem is romantic and touching. Well done. Marilyn

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thank you, Marilyn.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A sweet romance poem. I hope you show it to your wife! I like the feeling of reflecting about how things could be in some other part of the world but what makes everything right is the nearness of the beloved one.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

OK, what did you do with the real Bill Schott? This romantic softy is not the hard boiled, whiskey drinkin', tobacco chewing, gun toting Marine I am used to reading. Where'd you go Billy? Where are you?

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks, nomi. My wife has been spiking my my broken glass cereal with marshmallows.

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

I absolutely love the picture you chose for this piece. It is really fitting. This is really well written and I enjoyed it. I think this will do well in the contest!! Good job!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks, Puzzle

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A wonderful tribute to your loved one, in our memories and dreams love will never leave, excellently written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks, kahpot, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, what sweet things to say to your loved one. Any woman would love to hear them. I hope your wife reads this.

I think this will do well in the contest. Good luck.

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 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thank you, Yvonne. I'll show it to her directly.