Comment from Aaron Milavec

Excellent

I'm voting for your poem. I resonate with the theme of exchanging the stories that made the music in our lives. The "stories we tell" allow us to relish the events we created together.

In the film, "Her," Samantha says, "I keep retelling myself these stories because they provide the memories that I savor."

Also you blend the colors nicely. My taste would have been to allow for more empty spaces around the words.

Aaron

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020

Thanks for the idea. Never considered more space before. Appreciate your comments.

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Now that is so reminiscent and comforting. The music is not audible but I can hear Frank Sinatra singing in my head, Time after Time. The music did the trick, right?

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020

Thanks for the read and the comments. I believe you enjoy Frank time after time no matter what he sings. Me too.

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 26-Mar-2020

Great word play! Yes, of course.

Comment from Puzzle

Excellent

This one is great. For one...it embraces every single thing that I absolutely love; wine, fire and music. Two....it embraces every single thing that I love. Lol. I'm mad I didn't write this myself!!! Good job!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Wow! Thanks for the great review. So pleased you liked it.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Welcome cheer. I like the freshness re music of our lives. Can you get listen in there instead of just talk re music. Also: comma after come gives a gentle pause (apart from punctuation rule). Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020

Thanks for the comma tip. I thought about listen, but I like the idea of reminiscing so I thought talk a better fit. Thanks for the read and review.