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Law and Order. Virus Rules

15 syllables on hoarding toilet paper

9 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh dear -- toilet paper is the new harbinger... lol! ;) :) A great offering for the contest that give the smile we all need right now! ;) Best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Yvette, thanks. What do we do without the toilet paper? We use water and soap!!!
reply by Y. M. Roger on 26-Mar-2020
    There is a reason the toilet is usually right next to the tub/shower... lol!! ;) ;) ;)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Sure. And in the Italian houses you will find very rarely a bathroom without a bidet. Very handy in these trying days!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend,

A beautiful poem and an awesome presentation. I love it. I think you will do well in the contest. Good syllable count. Good luck.

Gypsy ð???

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Good review, Gypsy! Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This fifteen syllable poem, Law and Oder Virus Rules, seems to be saying that those who would hoard what is needed everywhere might be A-holes.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    What do you call people who load cart-fulls of toilet paper, leaving others with nothing? Lol. Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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What no pearls and diamonds for the precious toilet paper, we will get the cold shoulder now? :"

Out of toilet paper?
Social distance rules
quick to follow!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Izah, thank you!
Comment from Narsimha Chintaluri
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A funny take on the hive mentality being exhibited by our fellow humans over the past few weeks. Are you saying social distancing rules? Or a rule of social distancing is to follow others?

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    I am saying that, being there so many people without toilet paper, the smell becomes so unbearable, that it will be logical people want to keep a distance to each other. An easy rule to follow. (Lol)
    Thanks for reacting, Narsimha.
Comment from royowen
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I can understand more fully the reason for social distancing with this fine fellow, out of toilet paper, and out of luck, choiceless as far as social distancing heh heh, well done, a good entry in this contest, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Roy. Better making fun of it than crying over it. Stupid hoarders!
reply by royowen on 25-Mar-2020
    That?s true,
reply by royowen on 25-Mar-2020
    It?s like trying to find out who voted for trump heh heh
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Yes! Well, I'm in Europe. I am following Mr. Trump with great disgust.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    smile
reply by royowen on 25-Mar-2020
    Well done
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    :))
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Write,
This is an amusing poem for the fifteen syllable contest.
Gives new meaning to social distancing
determined by olfactory senses.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Robert! Yes, the world gets smelly!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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How clever! What a treat to read--I'm even getting paid (perhaps a pump too; odds 3:1 against). There is a hilarious youtube clip re desperate woman offering to trade a donut (plus!) for a roll of TP. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Yes, Liz. It is a hot issue at the moment. The world gets smelly.
Comment from Janilou
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LOL The great toilet paper rush emptied the shelves in our town. Lucky for us, I'd only just bought a big 24 pack so we were fine!
Glad to see people social distancing now. Unless there's toilet paper to be fought over!
Great poem.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Jan, thanks a lot. Seems that for the time being there is no toilet paper available. The world begins to have nasty smells! Maybe people learn to use more water and soap now.