Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! You have written a beautiful sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! You have written a beautiful sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Rebekka, thank you so much! I am such a hugger normally, so your virtual hug is especially poignant today! MEGA HUG BACK!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Fine poem with an anthem-like tone. I really like these lines for 't' alliteration: Tell it from the mountain tops
the tumultuous days
This is a great poem to suggest and declare that there is more to life than meets the eye, that it is better to stand united under God's care.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Fine poem with an anthem-like tone. I really like these lines for 't' alliteration: Tell it from the mountain tops
the tumultuous days
This is a great poem to suggest and declare that there is more to life than meets the eye, that it is better to stand united under God's care.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Cookie, thank you for your kind review and validation!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Very impressive, this form. I will bookcase it.
The poem is meaningful and the art is beautiful. Together words and picture form a powerful message. Beautifully done.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Very impressive, this form. I will bookcase it.
The poem is meaningful and the art is beautiful. Together words and picture form a powerful message. Beautifully done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Raffaelina, thank you very much! I am sending you prayer-filled thoughts of peace, acceptance and good health during these trying times.
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Thank you! I wish I had six stars to send.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I like the fresh image in the opener--capture that silver lining...safe place...habits / planets...peril / viral don't rhyme; sly and clever: "bug gone viral" (s/b prescribed--I do not deduct for typos) Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I like the fresh image in the opener--capture that silver lining...safe place...habits / planets...peril / viral don't rhyme; sly and clever: "bug gone viral" (s/b prescribed--I do not deduct for typos) Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Liz thanks for your observation,
Comment from Patty Palmer
Beautiful!! It's the best way to deal with the situation a hand is with knowing God is here. He doesn't forsake us in our hour of need. Put a helping hand out to a neighbor and take our mind off of ourselves. This too shall pass.
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Beautiful!! It's the best way to deal with the situation a hand is with knowing God is here. He doesn't forsake us in our hour of need. Put a helping hand out to a neighbor and take our mind off of ourselves. This too shall pass.
Patty
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Patty, I simple can't say thank you with enough vibrancy! You have humbled me with your validation!
Comment from Bill Schott
This trolaan, Capture That Silver Lining, follows, almost completely, the formatting as described. The theme of God's grace despite all of our divergences from piety is well stated.
The fourth line of the first stanza doesn't have a C word.
Happy day.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This trolaan, Capture That Silver Lining, follows, almost completely, the formatting as described. The theme of God's grace despite all of our divergences from piety is well stated.
The fourth line of the first stanza doesn't have a C word.
Happy day.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Holy smoke, Bill! Great catch, I did not realize I dropped the word creating when I pasted the stanzas in. THANK YOU!
