Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Capture that Silver Lining"Musings of an old man -2020
46 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent poem about staying together and cooperating in fighting through this difficult time with the new virus. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Bill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Excellent poem about staying together and cooperating in fighting through this difficult time with the new virus. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way. Bill
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Wils
This poem contains a great message and I found it very easy to read. Love the chosen picture. Good luck in the contest and continue with your writing.
Geoff
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This poem contains a great message and I found it very easy to read. Love the chosen picture. Good luck in the contest and continue with your writing.
Geoff
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Geoff, thanks so much!
Comment from samandlancelot
I enjoyed your silver lining carefully put in a safe place, in a satin binding, for the good of the human race.
I like the telling from the mountain tops, and God's Divine plan that we seek. We are enemy and friend together fighting this woe.
I loved it all the way through.
Patricia
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your silver lining carefully put in a safe place, in a satin binding, for the good of the human race.
I like the telling from the mountain tops, and God's Divine plan that we seek. We are enemy and friend together fighting this woe.
I loved it all the way through.
Patricia
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Patricia, your kind remarks are very validating, thank you.
Comment from TPAC
I find it surprising the numbers of God statements versus science given hopes prevailing this crisis. No viewpoints meriting science conquest of the concern, just the yielded God viewpoints as Overseer of things. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I find it surprising the numbers of God statements versus science given hopes prevailing this crisis. No viewpoints meriting science conquest of the concern, just the yielded God viewpoints as Overseer of things. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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TPAC, I for one a science bent mind, believes that is through God?s divine plan that the scientists are empowered to ramp up the needed resources to create the right solutions to abate a catastrophic event. But this is wholly my own opinion.
Comment from estory
There's a great sense of working together, of coming through this together, of learning lessons through adversity in the theme of this poem. There's a grit to the voice. A determination. A reliance on faith to overcome fear. estory
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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There's a great sense of working together, of coming through this together, of learning lessons through adversity in the theme of this poem. There's a grit to the voice. A determination. A reliance on faith to overcome fear. estory
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Estory, thanks for your reflection.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a well written poem, well worded and appropriate for the present trying times. Good use of metaphor in your number one stanza.
The rhyme form is a new one for me and quite a difficult form has been well managed by you, without compromising your meaning, and the sense of the poem. Very well done with a great picture and overall display. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello anon, a well written poem, well worded and appropriate for the present trying times. Good use of metaphor in your number one stanza.
The rhyme form is a new one for me and quite a difficult form has been well managed by you, without compromising your meaning, and the sense of the poem. Very well done with a great picture and overall display. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Dorothy, I do thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a well written and conforting verse. That we must all work together is a great message your poem relates. Best of luck in the contest. I appreciate this positive message.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is a well written and conforting verse. That we must all work together is a great message your poem relates. Best of luck in the contest. I appreciate this positive message.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Boogienights, thank you! I very much appreciate your validation and comments.
Comment from royowen
I've never seen this one before, there are so many different forms, this is a fascinating one, I like it, it takes the second letter of the previous stanza and applying it to every first letter with varying letters, are there any meter challenges? Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I've never seen this one before, there are so many different forms, this is a fascinating one, I like it, it takes the second letter of the previous stanza and applying it to every first letter with varying letters, are there any meter challenges? Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Roy, no meter challenges on this one, which I really like!
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Well done
Comment from Frank Jauregui
I thought your poem was well constructed and rhymes well. Take a look at the second stanza, however, should the last line read prescribed days - past tense? Other than that, I think you have a good entry and I wish you well,
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I thought your poem was well constructed and rhymes well. Take a look at the second stanza, however, should the last line read prescribed days - past tense? Other than that, I think you have a good entry and I wish you well,
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Frank great catch that was my intention. Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry using a complex style. You handled it well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem. The lines read well with good rhymes and great imagery. Because of the chosen style, the alliteration is forefront. It, too, flow smoothly. Your message is loud and clear. Yes, with God and one's faith, we can defeat this evil virus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is a great contest entry using a complex style. You handled it well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem. The lines read well with good rhymes and great imagery. Because of the chosen style, the alliteration is forefront. It, too, flow smoothly. Your message is loud and clear. Yes, with God and one's faith, we can defeat this evil virus. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Jan, thank you for your review and comments, I value your input every time!
