Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Your Halo"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Your Halo", is is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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"Your Halo", is is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Duchess, Wow! I am honored. I very much appreciate your validation and comments.Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your free verse for the club. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. The art choice is a good fit for your well-chosen words, too. I like that you paid tribute to the first responders who are at ground zero as are hospital workers. Together, with faith, we will defeat this virus. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed your free verse for the club. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery. The art choice is a good fit for your well-chosen words, too. I like that you paid tribute to the first responders who are at ground zero as are hospital workers. Together, with faith, we will defeat this virus. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Jan, I am so honored! I very much appreciate your validation and comments. One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times.
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Such a privilege it is to see
the embodiment of Christ
that surrounds you like a halo.
Your selfless giving of time
and talents while being at
such uncertain risk shines in you.", because it Glorifies God by showing appreciation and gratitude for His Servants! I'm in a ministry called Marked Men for Christ and we do this thing where we share with our brothers The Light of Christ we see in them and it blesses me so much! When all my brothers got on one knee in front of me and looked me in the eye and told me The Light of Christ they saw in me it almost made me cry it touched me so much!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "Such a privilege it is to see
the embodiment of Christ
that surrounds you like a halo.
Your selfless giving of time
and talents while being at
such uncertain risk shines in you.", because it Glorifies God by showing appreciation and gratitude for His Servants! I'm in a ministry called Marked Men for Christ and we do this thing where we share with our brothers The Light of Christ we see in them and it blesses me so much! When all my brothers got on one knee in front of me and looked me in the eye and told me The Light of Christ they saw in me it almost made me cry it touched me so much!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Fonda, I am honored, my friend. Thank you for sharing about your ministry! What a gift you have by the Grace of God!
Comment from Benshu-bookgai
I like the fact that this comes across (to me) as a call to arms--not in a shield-pounding, boot-stomping battle cry, but a gentle prodding to shed light on the darkness.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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I like the fact that this comes across (to me) as a call to arms--not in a shield-pounding, boot-stomping battle cry, but a gentle prodding to shed light on the darkness.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Bernshu, thank you fro seeing the essence of my message!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is really well done, Jim. Our healthcare workers and others who brave going to work in these scary times are wearing their halo. May they and the rest of us stay safe. We'll get through this. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is really well done, Jim. Our healthcare workers and others who brave going to work in these scary times are wearing their halo. May they and the rest of us stay safe. We'll get through this. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Marilyn, thank you very much! One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times.
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Your daughter and the other healthcare workers are pros. They're doing a great job and must be exhausted. Blessings to her. Marilyn
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a striking reminder of those who serve humanity every day, challenging themselves to perform and function despite the potential threat to themselves, given persistent shortages in vesture - in smoothly and warmly rendered free verse...
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, a striking reminder of those who serve humanity every day, challenging themselves to perform and function despite the potential threat to themselves, given persistent shortages in vesture - in smoothly and warmly rendered free verse...
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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eve, thank you for your review and comments. One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times.
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Oh my, how worried you must be daily nd yet proud and inspired at her career choice and courage, especially in these frightening times. You are very welcome, JLR, and thank you for sharing your tribute to her and all her colleagues...Eve
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a gorgeous poem about healthcare workers and God's mighty light shining through them like a halo. Sometimes we have trying days, we really need to realize that we're in this trying time together. Talking to Jesus in prayer helps.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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What a gorgeous poem about healthcare workers and God's mighty light shining through them like a halo. Sometimes we have trying days, we really need to realize that we're in this trying time together. Talking to Jesus in prayer helps.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Rosemary, thank you! One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times.
Comment from lance michaels
You are so right! Everyone that is able to help another person in need should do so. Those are good words to live by, even without this crisis, but now more than ever for sure.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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You are so right! Everyone that is able to help another person in need should do so. Those are good words to live by, even without this crisis, but now more than ever for sure.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Lance, thanks for your review and comments!
Comment from Minglement
What a beautiful tribute to all these selfless, caring folks who keep us afloat and uplifted in these uncertain times. God has given them the heart and talents we need. God bless them every one and you for recognizing and paying tribute to them. Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful tribute to all these selfless, caring folks who keep us afloat and uplifted in these uncertain times. God has given them the heart and talents we need. God bless them every one and you for recognizing and paying tribute to them. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Minglement, Wow! Thank you so much! One of our daughters is on the front line in healthcare in Seattle, we pray for her and her colleagues during these tumultuous times. She and her colleagues and so many others worldwide are the real winners!
Comment from Puzzle
Yes I love this! God shines his light through others. Especially in times like these when we need eachother more than ever! This is beautifully written. Good job!!!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Yes I love this! God shines his light through others. Especially in times like these when we need eachother more than ever! This is beautifully written. Good job!!!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Puzzle, Thank you so much!
