To Give in Great Measure!
We are in this together so let's care for our neighbors!59 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Regret being out of sixes. This is wonderful, from your writing and the topic to the visual you chose. Overall effect is stunning and EFFECTIVE.
Change nothing on this piece. Perfection.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Regret being out of sixes. This is wonderful, from your writing and the topic to the visual you chose. Overall effect is stunning and EFFECTIVE.
Change nothing on this piece. Perfection.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, Nice piece of poetry and keep it up! So touching and encouraging. Sure we should not care only for ourselves. Our neighbors are equally important. Nice presentation, attractive image. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi, Nice piece of poetry and keep it up! So touching and encouraging. Sure we should not care only for ourselves. Our neighbors are equally important. Nice presentation, attractive image. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from dragonpoet
Fonda,
This is a retelling of the Golden Rule in rhyme. In these times with the coronavirus and social distancing it is harder to help those in need. It seems soon a lot more will be in this situation with all hospitality and service people without jobs. Lets hope to find creative ways to help each other.
Stay healthy and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Fonda,
This is a retelling of the Golden Rule in rhyme. In these times with the coronavirus and social distancing it is harder to help those in need. It seems soon a lot more will be in this situation with all hospitality and service people without jobs. Lets hope to find creative ways to help each other.
Stay healthy and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from royowen
I'm so happy that you present the gospel on fanstory, it's much needed, this unusually unmetered but with articulate and strategic rhyming. But none of us are more holy than others, don't be like the Pharisees and trumpet your holiness, as Elijah did and was told off. Well done, good luck,blessings, Roy
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I'm so happy that you present the gospel on fanstory, it's much needed, this unusually unmetered but with articulate and strategic rhyming. But none of us are more holy than others, don't be like the Pharisees and trumpet your holiness, as Elijah did and was told off. Well done, good luck,blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
Comment from Sally Law
It is the Christian who must lead in this things as we are the reflection of Christ to the world. The world is very lost and needs a savior. It is at this time we can spread the gospel with kindness and generosity. So many are in need, even our fellow brothers and sisters and FanStory family. I pray for all today. Thank you for this lovely poem and reminder, dear Fonda.
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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It is the Christian who must lead in this things as we are the reflection of Christ to the world. The world is very lost and needs a savior. It is at this time we can spread the gospel with kindness and generosity. So many are in need, even our fellow brothers and sisters and FanStory family. I pray for all today. Thank you for this lovely poem and reminder, dear Fonda.
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a lovely poem, Fonda, and expresses all that we should aspire to be in it. Now, in these terrible times, we should think of others who are unable to fend for themselves. There is much we can all do, even something simple like picking up the phone and giving someone a friendly chat. I'm hoping the world will end up better for this test we're going through, Well done, a really lovely poem. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is a lovely poem, Fonda, and expresses all that we should aspire to be in it. Now, in these terrible times, we should think of others who are unable to fend for themselves. There is much we can all do, even something simple like picking up the phone and giving someone a friendly chat. I'm hoping the world will end up better for this test we're going through, Well done, a really lovely poem. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
In a time of crisis we all see the best and worst of human nature, the extremes of what we are capable of, either the sacrifices we can make for others or the selfishness that rears its ugly head, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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In a time of crisis we all see the best and worst of human nature, the extremes of what we are capable of, either the sacrifices we can make for others or the selfishness that rears its ugly head, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Patty Palmer
The Lord spoke beautiful words through your poem! It is much better to give than to receive! There's nothing more exciting to do something for someone without them knowing it. It's your little secret. And there is a great feeling when we can spread the word through our poetry. He gave us this gift for a reason.
God bless! Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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The Lord spoke beautiful words through your poem! It is much better to give than to receive! There's nothing more exciting to do something for someone without them knowing it. It's your little secret. And there is a great feeling when we can spread the word through our poetry. He gave us this gift for a reason.
God bless! Stay safe and healthy!
Patty
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Cindy Decker
Excellent rhyming inspirational poem! People should be selfless in these times, and that is what your poem expresses. Like we should all come together during this current trial, we should all stay united, even after the clouds have passed. Nice rhyme scheme. Very wonderful work. Stay well. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Excellent rhyming inspirational poem! People should be selfless in these times, and that is what your poem expresses. Like we should all come together during this current trial, we should all stay united, even after the clouds have passed. Nice rhyme scheme. Very wonderful work. Stay well. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!🙏🙏🙏
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Blessings!
