A Love
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Comment from George Anderson
I think I'm not the only one that was at first a little confused by it, but your little side note speaking of overripe fruit made sense. It speaks to me of a love that went awry but healed when the sun shined its light back on it.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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I think I'm not the only one that was at first a little confused by it, but your little side note speaking of overripe fruit made sense. It speaks to me of a love that went awry but healed when the sun shined its light back on it.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Good interpretation. Very nice. Thank you.
Comment from Ogden
With the Love title and description a red herring, the author, conflating the emotion and rotting fruit, plots misdirection.
Good try, Victor!
;)
Don
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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With the Love title and description a red herring, the author, conflating the emotion and rotting fruit, plots misdirection.
Good try, Victor!
;)
Don
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Ha ha. Thank you, Don.
Comment from Aussie
Well now, this is an interesting take on fruit? Or, you are writing about the fruit of life in the love so long ago? I'm not sure about your musings. I like to think it is a love lost and found in later years and the sun did shine again? Bless you, Kay.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Well now, this is an interesting take on fruit? Or, you are writing about the fruit of life in the love so long ago? I'm not sure about your musings. I like to think it is a love lost and found in later years and the sun did shine again? Bless you, Kay.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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All, of what you have said. Good job. Thank you.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
I guess everyone knows what it's like to experience a prolonged period of aloneness inside and outside of a relationship. Thank you for sharing this. The picture is very nice as well. Good work!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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I guess everyone knows what it's like to experience a prolonged period of aloneness inside and outside of a relationship. Thank you for sharing this. The picture is very nice as well. Good work!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Now time's fine, overripe mind crack, along with me - this is the true story here. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. Please stay safe and take care of yourself.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Now time's fine, overripe mind crack, along with me - this is the true story here. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. Please stay safe and take care of yourself.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Iza.
Comment from Mia Twysted
The title suggests that this piece is one that would talk about love. However, reading it through left me confused and I didn't understand what message was being conveyed.
Then your comment, "just a note on fruit overripe" left me even more bewildered.
I do like the last stanza. I can feel hope into the future.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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The title suggests that this piece is one that would talk about love. However, reading it through left me confused and I didn't understand what message was being conveyed.
Then your comment, "just a note on fruit overripe" left me even more bewildered.
I do like the last stanza. I can feel hope into the future.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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My dear, I'll just leave all alone.
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "'cause it
comes back
when you decide
to walk along
and shine again
on me.", because it reminded me of a relationship where someone missed the other a lot and how it ended on a happy note!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Proverbs 18:24 New King James Version (NKJV)
24 A man who has friends [a]must himself be friendly,
But there is a friend who sticks closer than a brother.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "'cause it
comes back
when you decide
to walk along
and shine again
on me.", because it reminded me of a relationship where someone missed the other a lot and how it ended on a happy note!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Proverbs 18:24 New King James Version (NKJV)
24 A man who has friends [a]must himself be friendly,
But there is a friend who sticks closer than a brother.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Amen, sister.
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Love"
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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"A Love"
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you, doctor Ricky.
