Comment from Richard J

Exceptional

Susan Dear,

I always find it wonderfully amazing how you reach inside, grab my heart, and kiss it so tenderly with the beauty of your inventive mind and creatively skilled knack for original poetry and presentations.

You are a true master ... thank you for the sweet treat, and a very happy win in the unique 2-4-4-12 contest.
Blessings, poetess! ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020

Thanks Richard, I have a pretty good teacher ya know. :-) Thanks for reading and for the awesome review. It is always appreciated. :-)

reply by Richard J on 28-Mar-2020

Seems we appreciate the same things ... each other! ; )

Comment from WalkerMan

Excellent

This lovely 2/4/4/12 poem captures the delight of Spring blossoming in a wild meadow, and is nicely illustrated by a photo taken from ground level looking skyward. The rhyme of the last two lines enhances the pleasure of reading it. Well done.

I rarely bother to review all these short-form poems generally lacking rhyme, meter, and punctuation, but your unique style stands out.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020

Hi Mike! Thank you for this wonderful review! I thought you might like that image :-)

reply by WalkerMan on 28-Mar-2020

You are welcome, Susan. Yes, I do like the image you chose. There are many such images all over, but TinEye did not find this particular one. Please tell me the source and/or add it to the post. -- Mike

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your sweet poem, Mystery Author. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. Your well-chosen words tell a great little story. I like the image you paired with it. Also, the rhymes are great as an added bonus Thanks for sharing and best wishes. I believe this is the correct way to write towards to make it 2 syllables--->t'wards (the ' takes the place of the omitted letter). Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020

Thank you again Jan, Yep I caught that mistake. Geez lol thanks for reading and for this review!

Comment from Aaron Rodenburg

Excellent

I like this poem a lot. You make it look easy. It is Seemless. I like the presentation and photo too. Does twards (ie. t'wards) need an apostrophe, it's the only thing I saw worth commenting on. Good luck in the contest, it is a great entry.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020

Hi Aaron, yep caught that mistake. Thanks for reading and for this review. Much appreciated. :-)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

A beautifully written and presented short work, your words enhance your wonderful artwork, "as mother nature beckons" very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020

Thank you for reading and for the sweet review!! :-)