Seek Peace
a contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from Rmocruz
You have poetically presented a worthy spiritual message during people's
time of need. Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
My pleasure to have read.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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You have poetically presented a worthy spiritual message during people's
time of need. Best wishes with this worthy writing prompt entry.
My pleasure to have read.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly. Blessings...
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our welcome, blessings as well!
Comment from joycetreasures
A nicely written heartfelt spiritual poem. Lovely serene image used. Doves always signify peace. A good title. The three lines are powerful words to live by. We should always Seek Peace if we can in our lives. You certainly met the requirements in your poem. Thank you.
Keep writing:-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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A nicely written heartfelt spiritual poem. Lovely serene image used. Doves always signify peace. A good title. The three lines are powerful words to live by. We should always Seek Peace if we can in our lives. You certainly met the requirements in your poem. Thank you.
Keep writing:-)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings my friend
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you are welcome
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you are so welcome:-)
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Focus on God's love and all of His promises", because that is the key to staying at peace in any situation, not just this one!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Isaiah 54:10 New International Version (NIV)
10 Though the mountains be shaken
and the hills be removed,
yet my unfailing love for you will not be shaken
nor my covenant of peace be removed,"
says the Lord, who has compassion on you.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "Focus on God's love and all of His promises", because that is the key to staying at peace in any situation, not just this one!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Isaiah 54:10 New International Version (NIV)
10 Though the mountains be shaken
and the hills be removed,
yet my unfailing love for you will not be shaken
nor my covenant of peace be removed,"
says the Lord, who has compassion on you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for your review, six star rating and the scripture which was an added bonus and blessings.
Blessings...
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. This is an excellent example of a 2-4-4-12 poem. Your poem makes clear sense and none of the words seem forced. The message is uplifting.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Hello mystery writer. This is an excellent example of a 2-4-4-12 poem. Your poem makes clear sense and none of the words seem forced. The message is uplifting.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Robert,
Thank you kindly...Blessings
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You're welcome
Comment from Bichon
This was an interesting poem. You have combined the act of a peaceful nature with your person beliefs, and it worked very well. Great job, best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This was an interesting poem. You have combined the act of a peaceful nature with your person beliefs, and it worked very well. Great job, best of luck.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. I see the correct number of syllables, a great picture to pair with those, and a great message nicely formatted. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. I see the correct number of syllables, a great picture to pair with those, and a great message nicely formatted. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have written a good
poem with a positive message.
-We all need to feel a sense
of peace and to look to Him
for guidance in these trying times.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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-Lovely image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-You have written a good
poem with a positive message.
-We all need to feel a sense
of peace and to look to Him
for guidance in these trying times.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gloria ....
It's a most unusual format, but with carefully selected words to fit your theme you've managed to create a poem that is not only meaningful, but also visually appealing.
Excellent write, author and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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It's a most unusual format, but with carefully selected words to fit your theme you've managed to create a poem that is not only meaningful, but also visually appealing.
Excellent write, author and best of luck to you in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Drew Delaney
Beautiful presentation. It's the right thing to do for sure. And in these times of worry and confusion, it's really the only thing. Love the pic too. Good choice!
Drew
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Beautiful presentation. It's the right thing to do for sure. And in these times of worry and confusion, it's really the only thing. Love the pic too. Good choice!
Drew
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Kellie Scranton
Love this, because without some sense of peace, you will have a mind full of worries and a life full of fear. You can't put a value on feeling peace, & contentment. I love the line that says "trust and believe" because in order to obtain any sense of peace, you have to be able to achieve trust & believe there is something bigger then you and I, guiding us and protecting us. Especially with what is going on in the world lately.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Love this, because without some sense of peace, you will have a mind full of worries and a life full of fear. You can't put a value on feeling peace, & contentment. I love the line that says "trust and believe" because in order to obtain any sense of peace, you have to be able to achieve trust & believe there is something bigger then you and I, guiding us and protecting us. Especially with what is going on in the world lately.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Kellie,
Thank you kindly for your review and comments. Stay well
Blessings...
