Sunshine
An Acrostic Poem11 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely, moving acrostic poem reminds us that we can still see the sunshine--even when we can't go out. We have WINDOWS. Maintaining complete normality just is not possible for so many people now. We have to come up with plan B, and C, . . . !
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Your lovely, moving acrostic poem reminds us that we can still see the sunshine--even when we can't go out. We have WINDOWS. Maintaining complete normality just is not possible for so many people now. We have to come up with plan B, and C, . . . !
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, and yes many more plans needed
Comment from Bichon
This was a very well written acrostic poem! It is relevant to our current situation and flows excellently. Hopefully when summer comes we can spend time outside in the sunshine.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This was a very well written acrostic poem! It is relevant to our current situation and flows excellently. Hopefully when summer comes we can spend time outside in the sunshine.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
very nice, sunny presentation.
-I can really use it!
-I like your acrostic,
and it is written well with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I hope the "distance nears the end,"too.
-I like the ending, as well,
with more sunshine.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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-Good artwork and
very nice, sunny presentation.
-I can really use it!
-I like your acrostic,
and it is written well with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-I hope the "distance nears the end,"too.
-I like the ending, as well,
with more sunshine.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your acrostic contest entry is a great presentation, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you formatted the lines. The chosen art is perfect for your well-chosen words. I like the rhymes--they are an added bonus. Your lines read smoothly on such an important current topic. Maybe is last line write sunshine's. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Your acrostic contest entry is a great presentation, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I like the way you formatted the lines. The chosen art is perfect for your well-chosen words. I like the rhymes--they are an added bonus. Your lines read smoothly on such an important current topic. Maybe is last line write sunshine's. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much, your help is appreciated and I have corrected, I am glad you understood and enjoyed
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Acrostic Poem
Sunshine
Hello, my friend,
I know that your poem is about the coronavirus but I am not sure what it's about. You know you can go for a walk even if you sheltered in. As long as you keep a distance from other walkers and the chances are there won't be a lot of people outside. Good job with the poetic acrostic form.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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An Acrostic Poem
Sunshine
Hello, my friend,
I know that your poem is about the coronavirus but I am not sure what it's about. You know you can go for a walk even if you sheltered in. As long as you keep a distance from other walkers and the chances are there won't be a lot of people outside. Good job with the poetic acrostic form.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you Gypsy, I appreciate your constructive comments, these will help in my future writings
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It may seem hard to stay isolated, but it is life saving and death is out there. I have been very fearful and have been isolated for four weeks now and not spoken to a soul in person. Only on the facetime. I am beginning to think that the only people in my life live inside a computer! A fine acrostic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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It may seem hard to stay isolated, but it is life saving and death is out there. I have been very fearful and have been isolated for four weeks now and not spoken to a soul in person. Only on the facetime. I am beginning to think that the only people in my life live inside a computer! A fine acrostic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you-stay well-and stay safe
Comment from Cindy Decker
I love your rhyme scheme, and fluent rhythm of your poem. I just have one error to point out. The corona virus is spelled with 2 o's.
Otherwise, you have an outstanding work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I love your rhyme scheme, and fluent rhythm of your poem. I just have one error to point out. The corona virus is spelled with 2 o's.
Otherwise, you have an outstanding work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much, and for correcting my OOps
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You?re welcome. ?Smile.?-/ my emojis aren?t working.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
agreed Corona is nothing fancy indeed. It comes i the house scares and the poor mouse. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings,and the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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agreed Corona is nothing fancy indeed. It comes i the house scares and the poor mouse. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings,and the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Acrostic poem you have penned - Sunshine. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely and bright art work. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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This is a very well written Acrostic poem you have penned - Sunshine. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely and bright art work. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, I liked your Acrostic about sunshine. Don't forget, if it's warm enough... (if you don't live near me)... open the windows and let the sunshine in! Fresh air is always a plus! :)
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Hello Author, I liked your Acrostic about sunshine. Don't forget, if it's warm enough... (if you don't live near me)... open the windows and let the sunshine in! Fresh air is always a plus! :)
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you and yes my windows are open
