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Hopeful Amid the Chaos

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Comment from Pam Norris
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I found your piece echoed many of my own thoughts. It is extremely well written and you expressed your thoughts and desires very well. Lets hope we all learn and move forward with kindness.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Pam.
Comment from Nottoway
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Excellent! A well penned and thoughtful message that we all can heed and move forward. I do hope that there can really be a re-thinking of how some feel about their fellow man, I am hopeful and fearful of the days that are coming.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Nottoway.
Comment from papa55mike
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We are truly living in amazing times. It's not the virus that scares me, it's the panic I saw in many people. Many seem to have lost their faith. I, personally, refuse to bow to the fear of this situation. What a wonderfully written piece. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Yovo Bee
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You wrote in your afterward that "you wish you would have listened to the whispers." What an amazing line that would be to start off your piece! I really like what you wrote and agree with you as well, however, I'd like to see some concrete details regarding this COVID-19 nightmare that make it specific to you! I guess, for me, too much generalizations take away from the reader's experience. I want to read about how this has affected you! Just my two cents, of course. Stay safe and healthy!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think the disbelief that this is really happening has caused the virus to spread because each individual person thinks they are invincible. I heard that an eighteen year old girl with no underlying health issues died in the UK yesterday, no one is immune to this virus, it will continue unless we obey the rules. A poignant write Violet, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Dolly. Take care.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I enjoyed this piece. It gave clear direction of how we could use this time to advantage. It is good to be told to reconsider things and aim for change, and many of us have decided that this is an appropriate time, provided that we can carve enough time out of our suddenly overfilled days.
We have been asked to work from home, so in theory gain the travel time to work and time chatting in the corridor, but these are only short for me. They are more than amply replaced by trying to understand what is happening to us by watching huge doses of news channels, checking in on distant loved ones every day, and I won't get into the problems of shopping expeditions.
No, there is little time to consider change. Perhaps that will come later, although past experience suggests that I am overly optimistic in this view.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Katherine. In times like these I believe it is our optimism that will help us muddle through. Hope all is well. Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You make a great point about what the outcome may be after the virus is gone. You give readers much to think about with your essay. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are precise with good examples to support them. One thing for sure, it will take time for everything to return to some kind of normal. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
    Thanks