An Eyewitness Account
Yes, sir, I saw the whole thing!20 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
A good poem for the contest! I ask everyone together and maybe pray!! It might help and add fuel to the fire!! Maybe God's trying to tell us something. Maybe we better listen!
Patty
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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A good poem for the contest! I ask everyone together and maybe pray!! It might help and add fuel to the fire!! Maybe God's trying to tell us something. Maybe we better listen!
Patty
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanx for your review and wonderful messaging, Patty!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-word poem, An Eye Witness Account, has the right word count and romances the passage of the solar giant through the day.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This twenty-five-word poem, An Eye Witness Account, has the right word count and romances the passage of the solar giant through the day.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have certainly made excellent, appealing use of all of your words in this poem of vivid description and awe-inspiring imagery. The artwork
gives the poem enhances meaning, conveying how a child looks at the beauties and mysteries of nature.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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You have certainly made excellent, appealing use of all of your words in this poem of vivid description and awe-inspiring imagery. The artwork
gives the poem enhances meaning, conveying how a child looks at the beauties and mysteries of nature.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you for this encouraging review!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a beautiful poem and presentation. You did a great job and I didn't find a single error. I do wish you luck in the contest. Keep writing and stay healthy. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful poem and presentation. You did a great job and I didn't find a single error. I do wish you luck in the contest. Keep writing and stay healthy. Shirley
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your review today!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a very good writing on sunrises and sunsets both of which can come or go with brilliant colors. I have seen the sun go down as a huge "pizza pie" size. Just gorgeous.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is a very good writing on sunrises and sunsets both of which can come or go with brilliant colors. I have seen the sun go down as a huge "pizza pie" size. Just gorgeous.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Therese Caron
This is both a sad and lovely poem, and very well written. It amazes me that 25 words can portray an entire picture and the feelings that go along with it. The image you chose is superb, and truly complements your writing. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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This is both a sad and lovely poem, and very well written. It amazes me that 25 words can portray an entire picture and the feelings that go along with it. The image you chose is superb, and truly complements your writing. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from May 1
Wow, that is so beautifully said. I love the vocabulary choices and how perfectly they work. Also, the image fits the poem perfectly. All in all, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Wow, that is so beautifully said. I love the vocabulary choices and how perfectly they work. Also, the image fits the poem perfectly. All in all, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Wow, May, you just put a smile on my face amidst all this craziness - lol!! ;) ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness in your week ahead - take care! ;)
Comment from hager
This is kind of a perceptive point of view poem...
OK, right off the bat I think the earth is flat, and that is afar as I usually take it... I know Nasa and all that stuff... To me it makes perfect sense that it, "lets say, is not what they say it is."
Alright, Poem is a visible visual, has me looking up towards the hilltop, then plants me there just like in the picture you chose...
chasing the sun as she flew, '{'see the sun is moving not the earth... tee hee '}
Then on Blues ceiling did she slide... Such a graceful line... Really, really nice.
On cue is Perfect... I liked this Poem of yours.... bill
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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This is kind of a perceptive point of view poem...
OK, right off the bat I think the earth is flat, and that is afar as I usually take it... I know Nasa and all that stuff... To me it makes perfect sense that it, "lets say, is not what they say it is."
Alright, Poem is a visible visual, has me looking up towards the hilltop, then plants me there just like in the picture you chose...
chasing the sun as she flew, '{'see the sun is moving not the earth... tee hee '}
Then on Blues ceiling did she slide... Such a graceful line... Really, really nice.
On cue is Perfect... I liked this Poem of yours.... bill
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, Hager, you just put a smile on my face amidst all this craziness!! ;) ;) But it has to end soon, yeah? Everything I do has been (is being) converted to online... see? High School students can't afford to lose ground so we're plowing forward with YouTube and more even when the lower schools are 'encouraging enrichment activities'... but what a hassle!! ;) Just give me a good ole fashion classroom any day!! ;) You take care and I promise we'll be laughing at this some day!! ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness in the days ahead - be sure to get some fresh air out there and stop by again sometimes! Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightfully fresh. Such whimsical imagery. Hilltops chasing the sun, sliding on the ceiling, falling on cue. This was a pleasure to read. Can't believe I'm getting paid to boot. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Delightfully fresh. Such whimsical imagery. Hilltops chasing the sun, sliding on the ceiling, falling on cue. This was a pleasure to read. Can't believe I'm getting paid to boot. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, LIZ, you just put a smile on my face amidst all this madness -- but it's gonna subside soon, right? ... Right??!! ;) ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness and fresh air in your weekend ahead - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
An Eyewitness Account
Hello my friend
Good word count. The presentation is beautiful. A poem about the sunset. You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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An Eyewitness Account
Hello my friend
Good word count. The presentation is beautiful. A poem about the sunset. You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for your review!
