A Day of Exploring
A Monometric poem for Potlatch Poetry23 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
That is beautiful artwork. You mention the attractions of the forest--the trees, squirrels, quail--all beautiful wonders of nature. It is hard to express these wonders in words. Interesting monometric form. Each line ends in monrhyme, and the length of the stanzas increases from 2 to 5. Very enjoyable. judi
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
That is beautiful artwork. You mention the attractions of the forest--the trees, squirrels, quail--all beautiful wonders of nature. It is hard to express these wonders in words. Interesting monometric form. Each line ends in monrhyme, and the length of the stanzas increases from 2 to 5. Very enjoyable. judi
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed reading it.
Comment from Puzzle
One of my favorite things to do is take nature walks. We live in the city so when we go to a forest park for the day we usually take a long walk. The picture goes nicely with your work. Good job!
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
One of my favorite things to do is take nature walks. We live in the city so when we go to a forest park for the day we usually take a long walk. The picture goes nicely with your work. Good job!
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you. I love to do the same. Being in nature is so peaceful.
Comment from Sally Law
This is a wonderful thing to do any day but especially during times of trouble. It is so soothing and God speaks in these quiet walks if we just listen.
Sending you my best today as always and trusting you and your family are well and safe.
Sal xo
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
This is a wonderful thing to do any day but especially during times of trouble. It is so soothing and God speaks in these quiet walks if we just listen.
Sending you my best today as always and trusting you and your family are well and safe.
Sal xo
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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We are all safe. Hope you are, too. I worry most about my paramedic son. Thank you for a great review. I always feel so close to God on these walks.