Never Lose Sight of Them
For they can overcome the darkness...24 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. The reader,
as reading the poem, had many memories of the fireflies. The artwork
is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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The author's words are clear, interesting and creative. The reader,
as reading the poem, had many memories of the fireflies. The artwork
is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
A very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. The presentation is beautiful and I didn't find a thing wrong with your entry. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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A very nice poem that I enjoyed reading. The presentation is beautiful and I didn't find a thing wrong with your entry. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of the few words the prompt allows. The sight of lightning bugs takes me back sixty years--makes me smile every time! Lovely piece
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of the few words the prompt allows. The sight of lightning bugs takes me back sixty years--makes me smile every time! Lovely piece
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seven word poem about never losing the sight of the fireflies which can become our only light in total darkness that holding our dreams together.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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A very well-written seven word poem about never losing the sight of the fireflies which can become our only light in total darkness that holding our dreams together.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Ah, Mystery Writer!
You have written about some of my very favorite childhood friends!
And dreams? Holy Toledo! My nightly dreams as of late have transported to times and places - along with familiar faces - that are astounding!
Kudos to your creativity!
Best Wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Ah, Mystery Writer!
You have written about some of my very favorite childhood friends!
And dreams? Holy Toledo! My nightly dreams as of late have transported to times and places - along with familiar faces - that are astounding!
Kudos to your creativity!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Thanx so much, Beatiful Lady! - I feel like I'm gonna go crazy soon... (some would argue it already happened (lol!). This craziness has to end soon, yeah? Everything I do has been (is being) converted to online... see? High School students can't afford to lose ground so we're plowing forward with YouTube and more even when the lower schools are 'encouraging enrichment activities'... but what a hassle!! ;) Just give me a good ole fashion classroom any day!! ;) You take care and I promise we'll be laughing at this some day!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation.
-You have used your
seven words well.
-Effective formatting
and nature imagery.
-The description of
dreams is also very good.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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-Very nice image and
presentation.
-You have used your
seven words well.
-Effective formatting
and nature imagery.
-The description of
dreams is also very good.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
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I used to do that as a kid, but always let them go! Thank you for the thought and the poem. You are welcome for the review.
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I'm not ready to let go of my dreams just yet... take care!
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No, I don't believe in giving up on dreams, either. I was commenting on catching the fireflies. I always let them go.
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Understood... but the fireflies are the dreams in the poem. ;) ;) ;)
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Right. I should have put two and two together and gotten four! You did a good job because you have the literal and figurative meaning, all in 7 words!
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;-)
Comment from Melody Koch
I really liked the metaphor of the dark night and the fireflies, everyone has their own ways of working out their problems! Thank you for writing this amazing poem!!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I really liked the metaphor of the dark night and the fireflies, everyone has their own ways of working out their problems! Thank you for writing this amazing poem!!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Oh my goodness, Melody, you just put a smile on my face amidst all these gray (and white and lightish gray and darker light gray...lol!) skies!! :) ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) May you find some brightness in your week ahead - take care! ;)
Comment from jenintorre
A very profound and thought provoking seven word poem with well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Best wishes. Stay safe. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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A very profound and thought provoking seven word poem with well chosen artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Best wishes. Stay safe. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
Comment from Tina Crute
I get this! Sometimes we forget to go after the fireflies. They're always around to be chased. We can watch them or , on purpose, try to capture those dreams. This little poem packs a mental punch!
Tina
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I get this! Sometimes we forget to go after the fireflies. They're always around to be chased. We can watch them or , on purpose, try to capture those dreams. This little poem packs a mental punch!
Tina
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
Comment from RodG
This poem/artwork combo definitely works for me.
Fireflies in the darkness are the perfect metaphor for dreams.
Much conveyed in only seven words. Rod
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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This poem/artwork combo definitely works for me.
Fireflies in the darkness are the perfect metaphor for dreams.
Much conveyed in only seven words. Rod
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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May you catch a firefly or two - thank you!
