Never Lose Sight of Them
For they can overcome the darkness...24 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love the image and also your poem. I did not get to vote for this poem but if I would have known it was posted, it would have won my vote. Glad that you placed first. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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I love the image and also your poem. I did not get to vote for this poem but if I would have known it was posted, it would have won my vote. Glad that you placed first. Congratulations.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this one, Rosy -- thanx so much for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
How did I miss this glowing gem? Congratulations on the win, dear one. So deserved. Stay safe out there.
Sending you my best as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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How did I miss this glowing gem? Congratulations on the win, dear one. So deserved. Stay safe out there.
Sending you my best as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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My fireflies and I both thank you, Lady Sal!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
You sure find neat-looking graphic art here. I've only seen fireflies in person once or twice in my entire life. But they were pretty and green and Puerto Rican, called cucullos. For some reason they are not found in every part of the island. What a neat way to emphasize the importance of dreams as an implied metaphor here.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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You sure find neat-looking graphic art here. I've only seen fireflies in person once or twice in my entire life. But they were pretty and green and Puerto Rican, called cucullos. For some reason they are not found in every part of the island. What a neat way to emphasize the importance of dreams as an implied metaphor here.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Wow, May, you just put a smile on my face amidst all this craziness - lol!! ;) ;) Thank you for your wonderful comments and for those bright, shiny stars!! :) And what a cool thing: cucullo -- never heard of 'em but will have to look 'em up! ;) May you find some 'fireflies' in your weekend ahead - take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. Congratulations on winning the contest. Your picture looks like my backyard on July 9th of any year. I live on the NC side of the Smoky mountains.
Nice job.
Z. :+)))
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Hello Yvette. Congratulations on winning the contest. Your picture looks like my backyard on July 9th of any year. I live on the NC side of the Smoky mountains.
Nice job.
Z. :+)))
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Yes - we have loads of the little flickery-guys in the summer, too, Z -- thanx for the review, sir! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This seven-word poem, Never Lose Sight of Them, has the right number of words in it and reminds the readers that dreams are still alive and that the night will end soon.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This seven-word poem, Never Lose Sight of Them, has the right number of words in it and reminds the readers that dreams are still alive and that the night will end soon.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from Bichon
Your short poem really created an image in my mind. Comparing dreams to the fireflies was a very clever idea and it worked excellently! Great work with this one.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Your short poem really created an image in my mind. Comparing dreams to the fireflies was a very clever idea and it worked excellently! Great work with this one.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you and may you find a firefly or two of your own...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked these uplifting words with a positive message amid the worlds pain and suffering and chaos we are experiencing just now, these words bring some hope, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I liked these uplifting words with a positive message amid the worlds pain and suffering and chaos we are experiencing just now, these words bring some hope, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you and may you find a firefly or two of your own...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Never Lose Sight of Them
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. Good word count. Great grammatical connection and flow. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Never Lose Sight of Them
Hello my friend
Beautiful poem and presentation. Good word count. Great grammatical connection and flow. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you and may you find a firefly or two of your own...
Comment from Cindy Decker
Nice poem! Your word count is exact, and the tone of the poem is surreal and dreamy, as dreams are before their realized. I like the metaphor of dreams maybe flying bright through darkness--like people navigate life during the really hard times. good luck in the contest. I would say to people:
Stay well during these uncertain times, the fireflies are just outside.Your poem is good work.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Nice poem! Your word count is exact, and the tone of the poem is surreal and dreamy, as dreams are before their realized. I like the metaphor of dreams maybe flying bright through darkness--like people navigate life during the really hard times. good luck in the contest. I would say to people:
Stay well during these uncertain times, the fireflies are just outside.Your poem is good work.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you and may you catch a firefly or two!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Dreams compared to fireflies is ingenious! We must have dreams for that is where goals begin.
"Wishes are dreams we dream while we are awake."
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Dreams compared to fireflies is ingenious! We must have dreams for that is where goals begin.
"Wishes are dreams we dream while we are awake."
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you and may you catch a firefly or two!
