The Right Touch of Magic
Be sure to bring your broom and pointy hat!12 total reviews
Comment from gingermo
In just three lines this cleverly rhyming poem captures the spirit of magic. Nouns...'starlight,' 'midnight,' 'spells,' add to the overall tone of mystery. I love the glamorous witch. Unfortunately missed voting on this one but poetically, in my estimation, 'A Touch of Magic,' was a winner.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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In just three lines this cleverly rhyming poem captures the spirit of magic. Nouns...'starlight,' 'midnight,' 'spells,' add to the overall tone of mystery. I love the glamorous witch. Unfortunately missed voting on this one but poetically, in my estimation, 'A Touch of Magic,' was a winner.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed, gingermo - sorry I'm so far behind! Being a teacher amidst this craziness has been lots more work than just showing up and lecturing!! ;) LOL! Thanx for stopping by - be sure to do so again sometime! ;) Yvette
Comment from BeasPeas
It's true that mystery begets more mystery and what could be more beguiling or mysterious than midnight? Nicely composed in a few words. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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It's true that mystery begets more mystery and what could be more beguiling or mysterious than midnight? Nicely composed in a few words. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Your review is very appreciated - thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-6, The Right Touch of Magic, has the proper formatting and suggests that the time of the chant is as important as utterance of the spell.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This 2-4-6, The Right Touch of Magic, has the proper formatting and suggests that the time of the chant is as important as utterance of the spell.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
You create a nice mood with your twelve syllables. I guess you could say that your words cast a nice spell on your readers. The artwork contributes nicely to the overall effect.
Well done. I wouldn't be surprised if this one wins.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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You create a nice mood with your twelve syllables. I guess you could say that your words cast a nice spell on your readers. The artwork contributes nicely to the overall effect.
Well done. I wouldn't be surprised if this one wins.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Lol!! Thank you for your review!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Right Touch of Magic
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt. Beautiful poem and presentation. I like the theme. Good syllable count. Well done.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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The Right Touch of Magic
Hello my friend
Nice entry for the 2-4-6 Poem writing prompt. Beautiful poem and presentation. I like the theme. Good syllable count. Well done.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! Have a magical evening!
Comment from Benshu-bookgai
Simple and ominous, perfect vibes for spellcrafting.
The accompanying visual--while neat--has minimal impact due to the fact that the poem is about starlight but the sky in the visual is overcast with no visible stars.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Simple and ominous, perfect vibes for spellcrafting.
The accompanying visual--while neat--has minimal impact due to the fact that the poem is about starlight but the sky in the visual is overcast with no visible stars.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh, how about a spell at midnight to set the world right again? Perhaps it's a touch of magic we need. We just need to learn how to do it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Oh, how about a spell at midnight to set the world right again? Perhaps it's a touch of magic we need. We just need to learn how to do it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Light might cast midnight hour magic. This is a very nice 2-4-6 poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings. Stay safe my friend.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Light might cast midnight hour magic. This is a very nice 2-4-6 poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings. Stay safe my friend.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! Here's hoping you find a bit of magic in your week ahead!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about the touch of magic when all the elements work together in the starlight it will lends a certain might to the spells cast at midnight.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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A very well-written 2-4-6 poem about the touch of magic when all the elements work together in the starlight it will lends a certain might to the spells cast at midnight.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! Here's hoping you find a bit of magic in your week ahead!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Beautiful choice of artwork. It definitely goes with the poem. Nice poem. It flows easily and I like the rhyme. I liked the phrase "certain might". For some reason, that phrase itself seems powerful.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Beautiful choice of artwork. It definitely goes with the poem. Nice poem. It flows easily and I like the rhyme. I liked the phrase "certain might". For some reason, that phrase itself seems powerful.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you! Here's hoping you find a bit of magic in your week ahead!
