Holi!
Holi symbolizes the triumph of virtue over evil.17 total reviews
Comment from George Anderson
Thank you for sharing this piece. I never heard about Holi before and it is interesting reading about it. In the short amount of words you could use you explained it pretty clearly and through a story as well!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing this piece. I never heard about Holi before and it is interesting reading about it. In the short amount of words you could use you explained it pretty clearly and through a story as well!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello George Anderson,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Commando
WOW! Quite an "AWESOME" Flash Fiction Contest Entry, RP. The artwork is "Astonishing," while the author notes are "Extremely Impressive." Thanks for sharing, best wishes for a contest win, and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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WOW! Quite an "AWESOME" Flash Fiction Contest Entry, RP. The artwork is "Astonishing," while the author notes are "Extremely Impressive." Thanks for sharing, best wishes for a contest win, and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Cathy and Bill,
You are two, but I see you as ONE!
I'm not finding appropriate words to express my heartfelt THANKS
for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by SIX STARS, Best wishes for the contest, and Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Curious as to how the Holi just sprang up again after having been burnt. Is this meant to be by miracle--I see this is a fiction contest. I like your colorful description of the merriment--I want to join in myself! Interesting opposition re sluggish/zeal. Cheers. LIZ
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Curious as to how the Holi just sprang up again after having been burnt. Is this meant to be by miracle--I see this is a fiction contest. I like your colorful description of the merriment--I want to join in myself! Interesting opposition re sluggish/zeal. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Elizabeth Emerald,
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your flow smoothly with preciseness and great imagery. The image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for the notes--interesting. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a great contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your flow smoothly with preciseness and great imagery. The image is a great pairing, too. Thanks for the notes--interesting. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by best wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, this is where you put all faith in God's hands...know that He is truly there...and He will stand by you...always...
very well written flash fiction story told my sweet friend...I love the story told...and the picture...
always good to see you...makes me smileeeeeee...you have a great night...and take care...sweet dreams...love to ya...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi RP, this is where you put all faith in God's hands...know that He is truly there...and He will stand by you...always...
very well written flash fiction story told my sweet friend...I love the story told...and the picture...
always good to see you...makes me smileeeeeee...you have a great night...and take care...sweet dreams...love to ya...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello L. Raven,
I'm not finding proper words to express my THANKS. Please accept my heartfelt gratitude for your so lovely and morale boosting words back by SIX STARS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Hi RP, you are SOOOOOOO always welcome...I went to check on the contest date...but so many now are put out by FanStory...I wish you all the luck in the world my sweet friend...God Be with you....and best wishes...love to ya...Linda xxoo
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Hi L. Raven,
It's so kind of you. Take care, please.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from kahpot
I read a wonderful story of Faith, even though the scheduled celebration was accidently interupted Faith had a bad situation turned good, an interesting and thought provoking read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I read a wonderful story of Faith, even though the scheduled celebration was accidently interupted Faith had a bad situation turned good, an interesting and thought provoking read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Kahpot,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by best wishes for the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Puzzle
That's so true. You need to fully believe. Even when times are tough and bad things happen that you dont understand. You need to put your trust in him.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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That's so true. You need to fully believe. Even when times are tough and bad things happen that you dont understand. You need to put your trust in him.
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Puzzle,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
