Holi!
Holi symbolizes the triumph of virtue over evil.17 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
His arms are around our world during this difficult time. What a wonderfully written story about the neverending fight between good and evil.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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His arms are around our world during this difficult time. What a wonderfully written story about the neverending fight between good and evil.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hello Mike,
Thank you very much for your so nice and uplifting comments. HIGHLY APPRECIATED!
With best wishes,
~ RP.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your inspiration from the Holi celebration. I admired the vivid, parallel artwork and the implied moral about the commemoration of righteousness over evil. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your inspiration from the Holi celebration. I admired the vivid, parallel artwork and the implied moral about the commemoration of righteousness over evil. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Hello Joan,
Thank you very much for your so nice, lovely, and morale boosting words.
Special THANKS for your stopping by and reviewing. It's highly APPRECIATED.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Louise Michelle
You did such a good job with this flash of fiction. It was engaging from the start and held my interest throughout. No wasted words here. Also, your notes were interesting and enhanced the read. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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You did such a good job with this flash of fiction. It was engaging from the start and held my interest throughout. No wasted words here. Also, your notes were interesting and enhanced the read. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Hello Louise Michelle,
What a pleasant surprise this is!
I'm not finding appropriate words to express my gratitude to you.
Please accept my HEARTFELT THANKS for reading my this story, and writing so lovely as well as MORALE BOOSTING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Thank you for your lovely response and for that vote. I'll be spending a little more time here - not much we can do outside the house.
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Lou, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
This short piece has an implied moral in a good story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
This short piece has an implied moral in a good story.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Hello Sharon,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck with the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from JudyE
We have a number of Nepali friends and have seen photos of the wonderful celebrations they have during Holi. We were there in January for a wedding. I enjoyed your flash fiction and didn't find any errors. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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We have a number of Nepali friends and have seen photos of the wonderful celebrations they have during Holi. We were there in January for a wedding. I enjoyed your flash fiction and didn't find any errors. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello JudyE,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Susan Larson
"He surely supports us with His ubiquitous and invisible hands." This is so uplifting to read during this time and always. I had heard of Holi, but was not aware of custom. I believe it is uplifting and therapeutic to physically and symbolically destroy the evil in our lives.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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"He surely supports us with His ubiquitous and invisible hands." This is so uplifting to read during this time and always. I had heard of Holi, but was not aware of custom. I believe it is uplifting and therapeutic to physically and symbolically destroy the evil in our lives.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Susan Larson,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from BethShelby
This is an interesting custom that I was no aware of. I found this to be well written and informative. I'm all for good triumphing over evil and having faith in the Almighty. I guess that is one thing all religions have in common.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is an interesting custom that I was no aware of. I found this to be well written and informative. I'm all for good triumphing over evil and having faith in the Almighty. I guess that is one thing all religions have in common.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello BethShelby,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Shirley McLain
A very nice flash fiction. I really like the moral of the story. "Faith and trust in God gives us a helping hand. I did not see a mistake. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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A very nice flash fiction. I really like the moral of the story. "Faith and trust in God gives us a helping hand. I did not see a mistake. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Shirley,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ulla
Hi Raghuvir, this is an interesting and very informative flash fiction. I liked it. I also have never heard of Holi, although I've been to India many a time. (Due to work).
Just one thing if I may suggest, take care of too flowery words and too many adjectives especially ending on -ly.
I learnt something new, and good luck in the contest. Best wishes. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi Raghuvir, this is an interesting and very informative flash fiction. I liked it. I also have never heard of Holi, although I've been to India many a time. (Due to work).
Just one thing if I may suggest, take care of too flowery words and too many adjectives especially ending on -ly.
I learnt something new, and good luck in the contest. Best wishes. Ulla:))
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by SIX STARS and Good Luck in the contest.
I'm highly grateful to you for your laudable suggestions, and have made changes accordingly.
With best wishes,
~ Raghuvir
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really interesting, and educational. I'd never heard of 'Holi' before. What a lovely start to the spring. A festival, bringing everyone together. Your author's notes were equally enlightening. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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That was really interesting, and educational. I'd never heard of 'Holi' before. What a lovely start to the spring. A festival, bringing everyone together. Your author's notes were equally enlightening. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Thank you very much for your so lovely and morale boosting words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
