THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Mr. Hyde "The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
7 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
Definitely love this chapter and the progression you are taking with it and the characters. Really like the build up in the plot. You've definitely brought them all well together.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Definitely love this chapter and the progression you are taking with it and the characters. Really like the build up in the plot. You've definitely brought them all well together.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Faye :)
I'm so thrilled to hear from you. Your feedback is very inspiring, especially after all that is going on. I hope you are staying safe.
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from cdefan
Cool artwork! The title is perfect for the chapter. Your new characters are addictive and well developed. So far, its really caught my attention, leaving me curious to find out whats going to happen next.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Cool artwork! The title is perfect for the chapter. Your new characters are addictive and well developed. So far, its really caught my attention, leaving me curious to find out whats going to happen next.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks cdefan :)
Glad you enjoyed another Breedline adventure. I'm having fun creating new characters, especially the Shadow.
Thanks again,
Shana :)
Comment from ngage
Exciting chapter, Ms. Shana! Great artwork too! Your chapter title grabbed my attention right away.
I'm enjoying your detective's, especially Manuel. His personality reminds me of my uncle.
You had me thinking that Joseph was going to get into it with the werewolf creature. Although I think you'll have them meet again.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nate
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Exciting chapter, Ms. Shana! Great artwork too! Your chapter title grabbed my attention right away.
I'm enjoying your detective's, especially Manuel. His personality reminds me of my uncle.
You had me thinking that Joseph was going to get into it with the werewolf creature. Although I think you'll have them meet again.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Nate
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks Nate :)
I always enjoy hearing from you. You feedback is so encouraging and motivating for me. Stay tuned my friend... more to come.
Hugs,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
What an interesting episode, Jena's now doing her "thing" of ridding the city of horrid crims, who aren't at all nice, and "eating" them, (yum) as Frank and Manuel speed to find out what's wrong with Carrie, they encounter Jessica's ex boyfriend who wants to discuss his relational demise with Jessica, and the Joseph/shadow is confronted by Jena's creature, and is fascinated by her "hideousness", beautifully written dear girl, blessings, Roy
Suggestion : As well as (helped) them with their jobs. Helping?
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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What an interesting episode, Jena's now doing her "thing" of ridding the city of horrid crims, who aren't at all nice, and "eating" them, (yum) as Frank and Manuel speed to find out what's wrong with Carrie, they encounter Jessica's ex boyfriend who wants to discuss his relational demise with Jessica, and the Joseph/shadow is confronted by Jena's creature, and is fascinated by her "hideousness", beautifully written dear girl, blessings, Roy
Suggestion : As well as (helped) them with their jobs. Helping?
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks my dear friend :)
So glad you are enjoying this new series. I was worried everyone might be tired of the Breedline adventures. Your feedback is so helpful. I do appreciate everything you do to encourage me. I hope you are staying safe with all that is going on. I'm saying many prayers.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Safe so far Dear Shana,
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In continuation, as usual and regular, the character of Jena continues to impress me as a round and significant and heroic phase of her helping the angels is contributory; I like it much; I look forward to discover more; thank you for sharing this appealing fiction; you may buy me a $25 Member Dollar gift card and help me make a Premier Shield upgraded member.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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In continuation, as usual and regular, the character of Jena continues to impress me as a round and significant and heroic phase of her helping the angels is contributory; I like it much; I look forward to discover more; thank you for sharing this appealing fiction; you may buy me a $25 Member Dollar gift card and help me make a Premier Shield upgraded member.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thanks Alcreator Litt Dear :)
I'm glad you are still enjoying the Breedline adventures and Jena's new life that she has to lead.
I wish I had the money to help you get your premier shield upgrade. I just paid my mortgage and my editor. In these scary times, I need to hold on to what I can. But when times get better, I will be happy to do what I can.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Mistydawn
What an exciting chapter. It's a very well-written, realistic, interesting chapter start to finish. I loved the little banter between your two detectives. I agree with Manuel, about opening the cells and letting Jenna do her thing. Imagine all the time and money that'd save, lol. The last part had me on the edge of my seat. I thought Joseph was a goner this time. I just hope Jenna can get him before he kills again.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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What an exciting chapter. It's a very well-written, realistic, interesting chapter start to finish. I loved the little banter between your two detectives. I agree with Manuel, about opening the cells and letting Jenna do her thing. Imagine all the time and money that'd save, lol. The last part had me on the edge of my seat. I thought Joseph was a goner this time. I just hope Jenna can get him before he kills again.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Mistydawn :)
Your feedback is always so motivating and gives me that good feeling. You make a difference. Thank you!
Hugs,
Shana :)
p.s. I agree with letting Jena into the prisons. LOL!
Comment from Shirley McLain
If I had a six I would give it to you. I am wanting to read more of your book and I plan to follow you. You did a great job and I didn't find any errors. Take care. Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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If I had a six I would give it to you. I am wanting to read more of your book and I plan to follow you. You did a great job and I didn't find any errors. Take care. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Shirley :)
Wow! You made my horrible day turn into a bright one. I needed to hear this so much. I appreciate all you inspiring words. Stay safe!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
