Comment from Benshu-bookgai

Excellent

I like your choice unifying the colour of the font with the colour of the crocus--it brings it all together and really makes it pop. Very simple imagery, but very powerful.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thanks much for your read and comments. Not many people notice the color choices. I'm so pleased you did.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Light and hopeful imagery--new beginning (which we hope the world will live to see). The photo is perfect for the piece. I like the seedling/crocus sandwich! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thanks much for your read and encouraging comments.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes that first sight of new life at the change of seasons is wonderful, this is beautiful short poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020

Thanks much for your read and encouraging comments.