Our Doctors and Nurses
2 10 2 syllables poem entry13 total reviews
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "when skies
are the darkest, stars rise and shine the most", because it's a beautiful way of describing difficult times!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
Philippians 2:14-16 New King James Version (NKJV)
14 Do all things without complaining and disputing, 15 that you may become blameless and harmless, children of God without fault in the midst of a crooked and perverse generation, among whom you shine as lights in the world, 16 holding fast the word of life, so that I may rejoice in the day of Christ that I have not run in vain or labored in vain.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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My favorite part was, "when skies
are the darkest, stars rise and shine the most", because it's a beautiful way of describing difficult times!
The Lord led me to these verses after I read this,
Philippians 2:14-16 New King James Version (NKJV)
14 Do all things without complaining and disputing, 15 that you may become blameless and harmless, children of God without fault in the midst of a crooked and perverse generation, among whom you shine as lights in the world, 16 holding fast the word of life, so that I may rejoice in the day of Christ that I have not run in vain or labored in vain.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights and for the encouraging feedback!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the 2-10-2 contest
with wonderful imagery of the night skies.
Excellent grammatical connection of all three lines
and a gorgeous picture to accompany your words.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You've written an excellent poem for the 2-10-2 contest
with wonderful imagery of the night skies.
Excellent grammatical connection of all three lines
and a gorgeous picture to accompany your words.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights and for the encouraging feedback!
Comment from QC Poet
Amen, on the every day workers and daily folks who grow, pick to serve us and All Help Related Fields. Sadly there are News Reports of the President's party members having advance notice and Profiteering. Blessings to you, Be Safe and Healthy. Good Luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Amen, on the every day workers and daily folks who grow, pick to serve us and All Help Related Fields. Sadly there are News Reports of the President's party members having advance notice and Profiteering. Blessings to you, Be Safe and Healthy. Good Luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights and for the encouraging feedback!
