Our Doctors and Nurses
2 10 2 syllables poem entry13 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Mystery Author. Those workers in the trenches are true super stars. We all need to keep them in our prayers. Your contest entry in in good form--correct syllables per line, awesome picture for emphasis, and a great message for all. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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You are right, Mystery Author. Those workers in the trenches are true super stars. We all need to keep them in our prayers. Your contest entry in in good form--correct syllables per line, awesome picture for emphasis, and a great message for all. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These words are poignant and I liked the message conveyed here, so many medical staff deserved a medal as they go into battle against this virus, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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These words are poignant and I liked the message conveyed here, so many medical staff deserved a medal as they go into battle against this virus, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: stars for you and your advise to the world. My husband
is a grocery manager. He unloads the merchandise and the people
wipe out the shelves. All the first responders need our air hugs and
prayers. **************** flylikeaneagle ***** stay well *****
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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PenPal: stars for you and your advise to the world. My husband
is a grocery manager. He unloads the merchandise and the people
wipe out the shelves. All the first responders need our air hugs and
prayers. **************** flylikeaneagle ***** stay well *****
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
The folks in the medical profession are bright stars when we are the most afraid and feel helpless. May God bless the men and women who risk their lives for us.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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The folks in the medical profession are bright stars when we are the most afraid and feel helpless. May God bless the men and women who risk their lives for us.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your encouraging feedback!
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You're quite welcome. Stay safe!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
I like how you equate our medical staff to the night sky. Our doctors and nurses are the current starring heroes, putting their own lives on the line to try and break the virus's hold.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I like how you equate our medical staff to the night sky. Our doctors and nurses are the current starring heroes, putting their own lives on the line to try and break the virus's hold.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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Hello my friend
Nice presentation and poem. Syllable count is good. The message is very positive. . I like it. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from BeasPeas
I think this is a well composed poem. It makes a statement that is true. Dark skies to prompt the stars to shine more brightly. It's an illusion, but it works. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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I think this is a well composed poem. It makes a statement that is true. Dark skies to prompt the stars to shine more brightly. It's an illusion, but it works. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clear and bright--figuratively and otherwise. Elegant; simply stated. Funny--NOT--that in these days of bright city lights, the skies never get dark enough for stars to be seen around here. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Clear and bright--figuratively and otherwise. Elegant; simply stated. Funny--NOT--that in these days of bright city lights, the skies never get dark enough for stars to be seen around here. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to describe an awe-inspiring nature scene. There are people like those stars who lighten the darkness for others.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of your fourteen syllables to describe an awe-inspiring nature scene. There are people like those stars who lighten the darkness for others.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece!
Comment from samandlancelot
Hey, I'm a cashier, so I am one of your brightly shining stars tonight. That aside, I love your picture and metaphor of our darkest days filled with stars.
Nice.
Patricia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hey, I'm a cashier, so I am one of your brightly shining stars tonight. That aside, I love your picture and metaphor of our darkest days filled with stars.
Nice.
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insights on this piece. And for your hard work as one of these stars!
